|Reviews for The Strawberry and The Fishcake|
| fusioninferno chapter 6 . 8/22/2010
Awsome! update more often please! )
| smokeapound chapter 6 . 8/17/2010
great story ... but fucking update soon god dam it
| Star Dust of Ancient Novae chapter 6 . 8/16/2010
| Reesie-cup4545 chapter 6 . 8/9/2010
dude this is so funny. at some point in the next chapter you should really have Rukia and ichigo admit their feelings and have beyakuya catch them making out or something. or have naruto compare kurosutchi to orochimaru in front of the other captains. but those are just sugestions.
| kyosuke-date-the soultaker chapter 6 . 8/7/2010
lol, this chapter is fuckin hilarious, please keep up the good work with this story.
| BemmyBean chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Love this story. Wish you would update more often
| RasenShuriken92 chapter 6 . 7/4/2010
i love it! :D
its awesome! :D kukuku
please udpate soon! :D
| Pr1nnyDUD3 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
this is good, wasnt sure at first. but i like you sense of humor, it works well with naruto and i think you blended the two worlds very well. looking forward to reading the rest of this.
| Cosplayer364 chapter 6 . 7/2/2010
| TheDemonfoxHiddenWithin chapter 6 . 7/1/2010
This a fuckin awesome story
| Khaotic Order chapter 6 . 6/24/2010
but hhow is narutos bankai useless in 1 vs 1 unless its like a mass destruction one?
| Aj Alpha chapter 6 . 6/23/2010
Great story so far, especially with the Walker concept (Which I wasn't feeling at first but I grown to like) keep it up
| NARUHAREM FOREVA chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
dude, i thought you didn't like yuri sex, and yet here in this chapter, you're saying that yoruichi fucked some random girl, just because naruto was there? wtfh? i mean, i'm fine with yuri, but i refuse to read any shit that has a girl that SAYS she's perfectly content with naruto, then decides naruto isn't good enough anymore, and fucks another girl, i refuse shit like this
| KingOfTheKill chapter 6 . 6/18/2010
This is my favorite fic on this site. You manage to blend humor, adventure and romance in such away that is not only enjoyable but immensely believable. You are also credited for developing a cool Naruto that could be seen as the one from Part one. You care a lot about your characters and you see that in your writing. I found when Yoruichi confessed her love to Naruto and vice versa was fitting and well developed. I also love how you manage the harem aspects of the story and can't wait to see who you put in next. All I can say is that i hope to see the next chapter very soon and I'm looking forward to it.
| Shi no Akai Tsume chapter 6 . 6/15/2010
In many of the crossover stories its hard to put the characters into the canon plot, but you changed it somewhat to fit your story. Nice job. I like Naruto in this story, he's a lot like Ichigo but he's still cool. The lemon scenes are very nice. The fighht scenes are well detailed and fantastic. The emotions of the people are true and believable.I look forward to the next chapter.
In the harem, so far I see Kukaku, Kyuubi, Tatsuki, Yuroichi, Mizuho(maybe), Unohanna.I'm hoping for Soi Fong, Rangiku, Neliel, Harribel, Sun-Sun, Mila Rose, (forgot name but other harribel fraccion), well that's all I'm hoping for there could be some I forgot though.
I hope that you continue this story, it is fantastic, I was a little wierded out by the title, thought it was yaoi. Thank god it isn't.
This story should be continued into other manga or anime, like One Piece, Veritas, History's Strongest Disciple Kenichi, maybe Air Gear, Rosario and The Vampire, Ping, Maken-ki, Tenjou Tenghe, Chromed Shelled Regios, Battle Vixens(has another name, forgot though), and may more. If you want to know what manga I'm talking about check . You might get some ideas, if you plan on continuing this I mean, you obviously don't ahve to. But well if you do here are some suggestions.