Reviews for The Strawberry and The Fishcake
The Kromann chapter 6 . 3/12/2016
Way to go man! The story is great!
scaryorange chapter 4 . 3/8/2016
This whole walker of the worlds thing is a little weird.
Squarekiddo chapter 6 . 2/23/2016
Neat, abit sad its abbonded, not surprised mind you, but abit sad, you were finally going away from constant canon, something I personally was enjoying.
Squarekiddo chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
Its funny and all but it just feels like youre so incredibly lazy, I wouldnt be surprised if you stopped writing the story all together.

You follow canon with a Naruto tag along and when you need something to guide Naruto to canon you LITERALLY do one of these, quote on quote.

Naruto chuckled to
himself. He was about to head home when he got a feeling he should
just wander the neighborhood because something was going to happen.

... If thats not lazy, me staying home during my 2 week vacation time eating pizza and chips everyday was productive.
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
great story, let me see what's going to happen in the chapter 2!
Great beginning, great action between the characters and more emotion
HOPE TO SEE MORE!
StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
When it comes down to it, this is porn with a plot. You understand that I could find that on any of the thousands of porn sites on the internet right? And if that wasn't bad enough, the porn side AND the plot part of this story was poorly done. Ah... but what do I know? I'm basically criticizing porn so whatever
BBWulf chapter 6 . 11/21/2015
Wooot! Finding new, good, fics is always fun. :D
miguce chapter 6 . 11/10/2015
really good
jwbones2000 chapter 6 . 11/6/2015
Wish you would have finished this one up. I liked the direction it was heading in.
Vader94 chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
That's Right In The Show They Said 'Ichi' Means One And 'Go' Means Guardian.
jeanette9a chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
ha-ha screw Aisen, it doesn't matter how many times he can regenerate. Naruto can send you're (you Aisen) sorry ass to hell, take that you Voldemort wannabe!
you can tell tat to the Bonts too. i like to call them Bounce, cuz i think it's funny and it would piss them off.
Clay19 chapter 2 . 8/3/2015
I like the mask!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/3/2015
Awsom story ,please continue
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
ichigo's name means protector of one
Aurora Lopez chapter 6 . 6/21/2015
when are you going to write chapters 7-9 of The Strawberry and The Fishcake, because I like thise story very much please bye. write me back!
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