Reviews for The Strawberry and The Fishcake
Domonic chapter 6 . 6/24/2014
Damn good story. i hope you finish it some day. or someone else finishes it. i dont really care so long as i get to see an ass stomping of aizen, or a complete humiliation of aizen. and kenpachi too. gotta see the two war-demon-gods fight eachother. but sgain, damn good story, just needs an ending.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
i would assume Naruto would be at a much higher lvl than Ichigo... it may not be chakra anymore but he would still have experience with energy manipulation, 2k years experience should mean his Hand2Hand, Sword skills and other things would be extremely high

if chakra was changed to raitsu he should have a massive amount, his chakra was massive in canon and the seal filtered and added Kyuubi's chakra to his own, so combine that with 2k years and his reserves would have been godly
Guest chapter 2 . 6/17/2014
Much better than the last chapter. I am glad that i am not the type of person to drop a story after only reading the first chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
I Disliked this chapter, it gives the impression that your story is just Sex with no real plot. While Yoruichi is kind of flirty, i find it hard to believe that she would just have sex with someone because they pushed her against a tree.
uscias chapter 6 . 5/17/2014
Please update soon.
SaucyHandles chapter 6 . 4/5/2014
This. Story. Is. The. TITS!
It's fuckig amazing!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/20/2014
ah this was good. At first I thought the whole sex thing was too much but after the first ch. it just fitted right the fuck in. loved it. Nice writing on how the women were treated, made em seem like idols instead of tools
Guest chapter 6 . 2/20/2014
This is a great fanfic however is your account dead because I noticed this is the latest update you have and it's almost 4 years old
Residenthobo chapter 6 . 2/5/2014



┬┐Is Naruto gonna cop a feel on Unohana? Even accidentally? Because, well, since you're so great at writing, I just thought that you would manage to make it hilarious.
AJGuardian chapter 6 . 2/3/2014
...yeah... no continuation to this is there?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
You basically copied ichigo for narutos shinigami transformation and even made him a vaizard he already has kyuubis power you should of just converted him into a hollow like being
Cersesi chapter 6 . 12/9/2013
I like it.
Minato 1 chapter 6 . 11/14/2013
Totally an awesome story hope you continue soon.
Minato 1 chapter 4 . 11/13/2013
Wow,naruto is a damn walker.
Minato 1 chapter 3 . 11/13/2013
I definitely love the perverted naruto
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