Reviews for The Strawberry and The Fishcake
Ryu chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Very good, Next Chapter! Fast!
slifer619 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
LOVE it man!

For the updating,are you gonna update once a week or when ever you feel like it?

and for the romance is it gonna be heavy or just lemons?
WolfLord04 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
damn almost all your stories are good. You are a good writer and don't let your other stories die too.
scman87 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
cool story, got a fair amount of humor and a serious undertone, update soon.
jere7782 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
this is great!

this a harem piece? I really like the way you integrated naruto into the bleach world.

I just wonder how strong he will be. I mean ichigo was strong. But Naruto with the unlimited supply of new chakra or reistu.

I love it! great work!

plz update soon!
slimjim27 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
great story, update again soon!
Delusional Fishies chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
the sexual adventures of not uzumaki naruto ( please use last name first, etc.)

He really is just some OC with a lot of power and having every womens falling for him... I.. don't see naruto in him at al...
HolyMage Mouto chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Who knew Naruto was a pervert. Please continue the story its so good.
Meca Vegeta chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Bo chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Awesome so far. Plz update soon.
amac1688 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
great story pleasee add some orihime and tatsuki please
Gforce member45 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
not bad, not bad.
Whispering-KAZE chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
hmm... if you want your story to move along a more serious plot, i will suggest you stick to maelstorm and guarduan. Strawberry and fishcake reminds me of crack fic...
Red King chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
I love it so far, and your right I have seen the idea before but I think yours was done better, I hope you keep it going
xiroxiro chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Wow great start D
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