Reviews for Astonishing X Men missing scenes
Innocent Lamb chapter 1 . 8/28/2009

I love you!

I hope the other chapters are as good as this one!
myelephantgirl chapter 5 . 3/11/2008
"You're a boy," she informed him, "and you just had an orgasm, so if you say it now it doesn't count. Say it again later."

This is the best line ever. Seriously. Awesome writing as usual.
Wolvmbm chapter 8 . 1/25/2008
A very nice chapter. :D

I would like to invite you into reading my newest Kitty Pryde story entitled, "A picture is worth a Thousand words," when you get the chance to read.

Keep up the good work on some of these tales and I hate to ask you this but what is the current status on your "Happily Ever After" story ?

I mean is it still continued or not? :(
Author376 chapter 8 . 1/24/2008
I loved the Quote.

"Efreboddy's dead, the kestle is on fire, ad I hef lost my hat..."

You're great really!

Thanks for the smile that generated!
Author376 chapter 7 . 12/22/2007
I like the story and I always enjoy your writing and plots. I especially like the tenderness between the two of them as he takes care of her, but the vasectomy part makes me sad. Those two always deserved to have the big family that they wanted, especially after the alternate time line with the sentinel concentration camp stuff. Anyway, loved it except for that (which is personal and unrelated to your writing, after all I plan to write about their kids so why the heck am I complaining that you aren't when I like the story anyway?)

Loved it, Keep Updating

Verity Kindle chapter 7 . 12/21/2007
Cat 2 chapter 2 . 11/11/2007
REALLY GOOD Story (and this is the best chapter). Please update soon.
Kaiden Shiba chapter 5 . 9/15/2007
this is getting interesting, please continue!
anhayla1 chapter 5 . 8/26/2007

Rose, I love you! Really! In a completely platonic way... but still, you rock!
Houkanno Yuuhou chapter 5 . 8/26/2007
Ha, I nearly died when I saw that "Whoof," and I swear my head was going to pop off when I read that "you have another hour if you wish to fornicate" line. This was definitely a lovely way to continue that scene!

I have to curse those guys at /co/ on 4chan though, for talking about those panels where Scott's life is flashing before his eyes. Now it'll forever be stuck in my head that one of flashes was of Emma orgasming. Dammit.
DJRyce chapter 3 . 8/15/2007
I really appreciate the complexity of this story. I'm a big fan of Joss Whedon's "Astonishing," but I'm not gonna lie- I was completely confused about the whole ordeal with imaginary baby Michael and Stuff and Perfection (who I still don't completely understand).

In retrospect, the whole shipping them off to Breakworld probably is a bit perfunctory given the psychological trauma that Kitty must have endured. I think you capture her confusion and desires very well.

It's not a pairing that's explored very often, but they are a classic.
Houkanno Yuuhou chapter 3 . 8/15/2007
I do hope you write more. These are wonderful. I've always tinkered with the idea of doing a "Why did they really break up?" story because I'm older now, and I know the real reason behind the split (Jim Shooter).

Poor Piotr. Poor Kitty. After all they've been through, you'd think they could find some pure happiness. If only Marvel would give them a chance. But then again, look at what happened to Jean and Scott.
darkstorm5000 chapter 2 . 8/12/2007
Liked the missing scene from chapter one! And right after reading reason 4 in chapter two, I could just here that old-school, soap stock-organ riff start up.

Good job!
Starsinger chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
It's just dawned on me why I thought I've read these stories before, I have, on lj where you posted them. I loved this story there and I'm so glad you've posted it here.