Reviews for The feelings that he hides
kandita chapter 14 . 3/8/2012
It's been a long time since this was last updated, but if you can please update soon
RiddleMeNew chapter 14 . 7/29/2009
Lady... update now! before I send the peguins! Mawhahahahahahahahahahaha! Lol. Update plz...
in your dreams as well chapter 14 . 3/6/2009
plz update soon i really like this story
endstart chapter 14 . 1/31/2009
I like it. Update soon please
SHeWithNoName chapter 14 . 12/30/2008
omg! i twould be so awesome if they met in the middle of the desert
Murasaki Shikibu chapter 14 . 9/15/2008
Nice chappie! I lurved it but not as much as some of the other chapters..keep updating your doing good!
Atanih Manaka chapter 14 . 9/14/2008
Atanih-*sleeping upside down on a tree branch while using her chakra to stay up*

Sasuke and Akuma-*snickering and watching from behind a bush*

Akuma- Okay ready?

Sasuke-Yeah...*sneaks up under Atanih with Akuma and they both take a deep breath*


Atanih-*screams and falls on her head then gives Akuma and Sasuke death glares* I will KILL you for this...*gets up and pulls a chainsaw out of nowhere and chases them*

Sasuke-I thought you said she wouldn't be angry!*screams when she gets really close to killing him*

Akuma-*is really really REALLY far away* I lied!*laughs as Atanih pounces on Sasuke and saws him to pieces*

Atanih-*gets off Sasuke and licks the blood off of her hand and chainsaw* I never would have thought Sasuke-san tasted so good... anyway, good story! I hope you update soon! *picks up whats left of Sasuke's body and goes to find Akuma*
Atanih Manaka chapter 12 . 9/14/2008
Atanih-*sighs and pokes Sasuke boredly* Emo-boy...

Sasuke-*pokes her back* Psychopath...

Atanih-*pokes him back* Sas-gay...

Sasuke-*pokes her back* Crazy bitch...

Atanih and Sasuke-*sighs*

Akuma-*pouring three cups of tea* You guys bored?

Sasuke and Atanih-Yeah...

Akuma-*puts blood and bone dust in two cups and honey and suger in the third* Have some tea...

Atanih and Sasuke-Hn...*Atanih takes one with blood and Sasuke takes the one with honey and they drink*

Akuma-*drinks her tea* I am so bored...*sighs*

Sasuke-*looks at Atanih* Wanna go get some ramen?


Sasuke and Atanih-*leaving* Nice story by the way, it really is...nice...
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 14 . 9/13/2008
you shouldn't be so negatif about yourself! the story is nice! so stop worrying!

so you don't update quickly, who does? being lazy is something writers are proud of! besides i like the chapter, it shows how much hinata loves gaara
CaramelDucky chapter 14 . 9/13/2008
sniff you haven't updated in so long. im glad i didn't lose faith. xD ROCK ON! now update again :o
I NEED GAMES chapter 12 . 9/2/2008
Your story has an interesting plot, and you have an excellent image for the characters, though you really should improve on your grammar as you know, but other then that flaw, don't stop. You've got the imagination, all you need is some spelling imrpovements. Other then that you're a good author, make a sequel, and don't forget to smiley face D
meggoneggo chapter 13 . 7/2/2008
update soon!
Murasaki Shikibu chapter 13 . 6/30/2008
No! Don't update them! Keep them like that..and..I dunno but the stories much cooler if you have some grammer errors in it..I don't like the all perfect way and some may not either..cause I feel stupid reading something that doesn't even have one teensy mistake...hehe...
Murasaki Shikibu chapter 8 . 6/30/2008
Cool! I like the story..but I gotta take a break and go hang up drawings, tidy up my room, and other cleaning stuff real quick...BYE! Keep updating!
Ylva Nanna Sylvi chapter 13 . 6/26/2008
OMG...I love the whole the whole story so please update and post new chapters soon
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