Reviews for Fragile
dbz-lover91 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
What can I say? I guess I'm just in the mood for your one-shots (however much they test my propensity to bawl like a baby;).

Again, I'm not even a fan of V/B but this was well-written.

I love the way he left the room. It had such a sense of finality to it but it couldn't be described as a cold departure. Argh, I'm not even coherent right now(forgive me, I just finished a month's worth of exams and I am completely drained)

Again, you have a style of writing that's all you_~

Take care,


PS: Goku's Daughter updated 'Sinful' Yay! (I know you were reading it)
aussie girl1990 chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
Wow this story was beautiful, I love Vegeta's tender and yet still strong form.

I love how he figured that even though she had died all the time he had spent with her wasn't a waste, how their kids were still alive and living.

A fav for me :)


P.S I'm glad you liked my story :)
TragicBlackButterfly chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
omigosh this one almost made me cry. it was really good.
Warrior from beyond chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
very good.
JeMS7 chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
That is so cute and sad, I love it. That is just the right amount of emotion that Vegeta would've shown.
Jazzy Uchiha chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
i liked it