Reviews for Morpheus's Chokehold
minerva86 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
this is really good. love to see it elaborated on.

all your rita slash is seriously grand

:D
emily-undaunted chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Funny. Impressive dialogue. Surprisingly erotic. Didn't think it was going to be a dream.
WinstonIsMyName chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Rita is sexxy! ; )

This is awesome, loving it all!
ty.soglasna chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Haha, that was funny. I like the post-dream scenes better though!
chrisdga chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Hello. I already commented lots of your stories on you LJ, I'm just here to add this to my favorites and you to my authors.

You don't really plan to write another Hermione/Rita? Really? Ó.Ò
ScreamForSOH chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
hahah. aw cute. poor hermy. XD
Yuki523 chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
awesome fic. making a sequal would be cool, though. -
ilikegoodwriting chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
ehh, not much of a slash person, but very funny!
Yuki523 chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
YAY! ANOTHER YURI IN HARRY POTTER! - oh...could you maybe make a sequil? pleease? O-O
Voidangel Soren chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
my eyes...
dumbledore'swoman chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Once again, another brilliant story.

Rom, dear, dear Ron - what a legend. I loved Hermiones disgust with herslef. Ritas a sexy character though ! More Hermionita please !
Estarc chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
A dream is a much better way to go about it then actually suggesting a relationship between them. And Hermione's own self disgust was quite amusing. And Ron, precious Ron... Well, good on him for vocalising it. Or trying to.
Clairmont chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Cute. Creepy...but cute none the less. The ending particularly was amusing. Oh Ron...lol.
KagSanlover chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
I absolutely think that the lady who plays Rita is a total Hottie, too! And I love Rita and Hermione together, like Fleur and Rita. I know what! You should write a threesome story with the three of them, Rita, Fleur, and Hermione.

I loved the end with Ron and Harry too!
AnimeFanReader01 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Nice, kinda wish for a sequel though.
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