Reviews for A Moment like This |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well done! Reading this is almost frustrating because I think- they were in love and alone together so much, no way they wouldn't have kissed at least a few months earlier than they did. Oh well! I love the build up, too! |
![]() ![]() When Lee whispered, "Please"...I almost dropped my phone! Is it hot in here? So well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh so sweet to imagine how our favorite duo finally closed the gap and fell into the arms of their match for life. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I don't know how I missed this one, but I'm glad I found this one! Great chemistry and dialogue. I enjoyed this thoroughly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this vignette. I hope for more fanfic. Please? This one was sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry I hadn't found this until now. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks Ann, but I did have two at the time just to be sure the dialogue sounded smooth and catch any simple errors that I missed during my re-reads! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I decided to rewatch that episode and then read this at the exact point you described. It fits beautifully! You have a nice writing style too. Not sure you even need a beta ;) Lovely story, I could see and hear them completely in character. That tag definitely was leading up to (another) kiss, don't you think? Even if it didn't happen until later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They started out a bit awkward and shy, but that's ok. A simple supper to which Lee added romantic touches to signify she's important to him. Smooching during the movie, taking their time was all good. Lee was right to guard their privacy when Billy called. Best of all he followed her home. It all made for a great impromptu date. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story. Very sweet. But there is a typo you might want to change. He looked at here 'warily", not wearily. Two different meanings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet story. .I loved it. You should keep writing SMK stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story! Hope you write more SMK stories! I loved the way he was looking at her. They just always get interrupted. I could see it all happening. |