Reviews for Rotten Luck
CreativePupil chapter 35 . 9/30
This is one of the best Pokémon transformation fics ever written and yet, it hasn't been updated in years. From what I've read out of this story though, it looks like you've written yourself in a corner since there were a lot characters and plotlines you were coming up with. You've got the on-the-lam Porygon family with their mysterious forth entity, a Pokémon speaking middle English looking for something, this contest happening, and quite a lot more. So yeah, I don't blame you for having abandoned this for over seven years now. Your story even got a TV Tropes page (if anyone's interested, go over to that site and search this fic's title) and yet, this fic's still incomplete after all these years.
Guest chapter 35 . 9/6
I have some ideas on the mystery parts

Idea #1: the 4th Pokemon.
I think it was a rotom for multiple reasons. 1 rotoms can travel through elections just like the porygons. 2 rotom sometimes causes the devices it possesses to transform in a more battle ready state, as seen in all for the form you can turn it into in the games. This goes to the fact that the radio gamma possessed turned into a mech. 3 the so called virus in gamma is from rotom possesseing him trying to hide, I think the other porygons know this but are all working together to hide rotom. 4 rotoms also can cause massive damage to the deceives it possesses, so when gamma went into the Pokedex its was fried. But this is just an idea, although my proof is very likely

Idea #2: The blue figures
These people may be the parents of the ralts that johnathan was reborn into. 1 they are hell bent on finding a lost object that was taken from them. This object they found out was dropped into the forest by a spearow that died when stealing it, the place where johnathan woke up. So it could have been their egg. 2 one of them said if it had survived and the other said it was sure for he/she saw John fighting brick, this is also where I think the confusion attack came from. Ok so the fact that of they are his new parents, the are said to be blue meaning that they are shiny. This may not be impossible but unlikely because it's rare and John is not shiny. That or they are just wearing blue clothing, but even that is unlikely for Pokemon don't use and clothing

So if anyone is going to continue this for all of us, these are some ideas for the mystery areas.
Guest chapter 35 . 9/5
Ok, so I think one thing is obvious. He's not gonna continue this, it's been to long. So I would suggest someone out there continue this for us all and post a link here. But in case he dose come back please put credit to him somewhere in the story, this way there is no hate form those who don't like the idea of stealing. Now I know there have been mysterious part that only he would know what they are like the blue figures but we can always make stuff up. So if anyone out there wants to save this storie. please do
poketrainerkhang chapter 35 . 8/28
This story made me fell off my chair while I was reading. That knee part still hurts (ow). Good job! This story is damn funny, and (kinda) doesn't have anything related to love, unlike most of the other stories on here *shrugs*. Well keep on the good work!
Dinoception chapter 1 . 8/6
I really did like this. It's quite sad you quit. And on a cliffhanger no less! I hope you didn't die, and that the story starts up again.
Ultra Princess Luna chapter 10 . 6/11
Wait a minute, Ember's tail makes light, but I didn't see any mention of it...
Ultra Princess Luna chapter 2 . 6/8
Man... I wish I had that relic, so I can wish this story back alive...
Ultra Princess Luna chapter 1 . 6/8
Hey, this story gave me inspiration to make my own based off of this story! Thanks!
Gallade32 chapter 35 . 6/8
Huh, I guess rotten luck stays even through death/hatching.
Gallade32 chapter 32 . 6/8
Huh. This story seems awfully familiar, but I can't put my finger on it...
IncaMiyuki chapter 35 . 11/13/2014
Please finish this!
Guest chapter 35 . 9/20/2014
Come on! Dude, I totally think your story is hilarious, but you've been slacking off! And at this cliffhanger, too! Seriously, MORE CHAPTERS!
NYSTLSportsFan chapter 35 . 8/27/2014
Man, it's such a shame that this was never finished. This was one of the first really great stories I read on this site (well before I even had an account), and even though it's been so long, it's still great. If you ever see this, you should definitely continue this story. There's so much potential here; I don't want it to go to waste.


gokumutt26 chapter 35 . 7/27/2014
maskwolf chapter 35 . 7/15/2014
I need to ask why did you stop writing it a good story to say the best story ever read why have you stop
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