|Reviews for Rotten Luck|
| Guest chapter 35 . 2/19
Maybe Jenny should invest in items relating to luck and increasing a pokemon's chance of success! This is such a fun story, I'm sad to see that it hasn't been updated in a few years- I would have LOVED to see Jenny get excited about contests and try to play dress up with Johnny.
| Guest chapter 31 . 2/19
I think it would be great if Jennifer, thinking the world of pokemon battles far too dangerous for her accident prone Raltz, decided to train him up in hopes of evolving him into a Gardevoir to enter him in beauty contests! She could even save up some cash and buy him the HM Flash, which not only has a beautiful appeal, but is good to blinding and escaping aggressive pokemon.
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/19
He can write?! WRITE DOWN WHAT HAPPEN AND SHOW IT TO JENNY! and hope she doesn't scream at the fact that she's been getting naked in front of you
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/19
I think that relic is a mew! And that the antique shop was actually an illusion created by the "shop owner" who was really a legendary pokemon in disguise!
Is Jonathan sure he's a male raltz? He was a male human and has the memories and personality of a male human, but how does he know he was put into a male Raltz' body? You'd think with all the times he's watched Jennifer change her clothes and hug him to her chest we would've seen a poke'boner by now.
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/19
I like how he assumes Jenny is going to spend the cash to buy a dawn stone, I think most girls would prefer having an elegant male gardevoir
| ViscoFuse chapter 35 . 2/12
Tis a shame. All good fanfics are never continued. Non the less your fic was well written and i quite enjoy it. I would love to see it continued.
A fighting friend,
Visco the Riolu
| PkmnGd chapter 35 . 11/5/2016
This was a really great chapter and I liked the way Johnathon learnt about Luck is an amazing fanfiction and I can't wait for the next chapter.:-)
| Random dude chapter 35 . 10/24/2016
I really like this book and would love to see more so here's a review to motivate you.
| Gamma chapter 35 . 10/13/2016
| Ryvkah chapter 35 . 10/1/2016
When you find an awesome story that hasn't been updated since 2008- sighh~~~
Either way, you did really great on this work! I absolutely love the personality and layouts that you gave both the story and the characters. It gave me a lot of new ways to imagine how much of a pain it must be to be a ralts~ xD
Soo cuuttee~~~ 3
| Guest chapter 35 . 9/20/2016
| Melisanotaku chapter 8 . 7/29/2016
Haha, should have called "charmanderese", "charmanderin"
| Lunala - get in the bag chapter 8 . 7/25/2016
The Articuno vs. Zapdos vs. Moltres conversation at the beginning reminds me of why I picked Team Instinct.
| Toriathan chapter 14 . 7/7/2016
Yes, but where does a wild Pikachu find a thunder stone?
| Toriathan chapter 12 . 7/7/2016
Only mew glows when it transforms. Ditto is just play-doh.