|Reviews for The Memory Remains|
| Sushi Chi chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Man, that was awesome. Loved it. Well done. I mean, honeslty. I love your stories. I do. You write so well. And I love that your stories often deal with the bond between brothers. That makes me happy. I love brother bonding. And Dean whumpage. And Angst. Which you seem to have all three in many of your stories. Again, this makes me happy.
So, well done.
Many thanks for writing the stories that I love to read.
| bhoney chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Wow, this was very well written. I liked it a lot. Loved the brotherly moments, Sam looking after Dean and reassuring him.
You had some really beautiful lines in here that conveyed the mood perfectly, very bittersweet. These are a couple I liked:
"...the warmth of the water receding to a luke warm reminder that nothing perfect lasts forever." "...the rain outside pelted against the window, causing the early morning to appear darker and less hopeful than a new dawn should."
Love your explanation for why the boys are both such coffee lovers, tying that in to the idea of home for them.
Nicely done! I'm putting this in my faves list.
| yaoigirl20 chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
aw. that was so cute! really good job!
| Starkreactor chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Good, I liked it!
| hpsupernaturalfan chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Nice and sweet. But not overly surgary.
| happycabbage75 chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
I'm not sure how I managed not to leave a review for this little beauty. Because it's magnificent. DARN magnificent.
I think it's this line that gets me every time.
-At that Dean did look up, the look in his eyes devastated Sam. The shock of the emotion within the green depths threatening to knock him out of the car and onto his ass in the dirt below.
| Louise20excite chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
Great story! Very well written and thoughtful. Fairly true to the characters, although I doubt Dean would let Sammy undress him in the shower...he's much to butch and macho. Keep writing. I would love to read more!
| EFW chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Seriously, I don't know where I've been. Being a responsible adult, I suppose - but missing my favorite fanfic writers - like you. I can't believe I have so much to catch up on.
Loved this piece. Like you, I always want to see the aftermath of episodes like this one. Thank God for talented fanfic writers that let us 'see' it unfold. This was a great piece, with lots of insight into not just the brothers' relationship, but also into how they see themselves and each other in the big picture of their lives.
Very nicely done. Your writing just keeps getting better.
| ThornGryphon chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
God. I loved this. When most people write about Sam taking care of Dean they do it all wrong, but you added in all the right narration to make this story completely believable. Amazing work and I love your writing. Keep it up. *smile*
| Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Wonderful story! I think that episode needed a little more brotherly care and you did a nice job with it!
| Winchester73 chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
One of my favourite episodes, which makes me cry everytime I watch it. This just adds to it Thanks
| Sensue chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
I just wanted to let you know how MUCH I LOVE this story.
It is wonderful. Full of angst, emotion, love, and hurt/comfort.
I love it so much that this story will be the featured story at Supernatural Fanfiction awards (september.)
I will post your button hopefully by the end of the day.
Keep it up...I'd love to read more from you.
| livelongprosper2012 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
love the angst and love. great writing, too.
| lucablue chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
I loved this episode and couldn't agree more...the end needed to be at least another 10 minutes so we could get more Dean angst. You have done this beautifully, not too soppy, not too dramatic - just perfectly Sam and Dean. Thank you for the closure!
| Maz101 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Loved this! I wanted more at the end of that episode - I wanted to have more explanation. The scope for angst was immense and you've dealt it up. Thanks.