|Reviews for Family First|
| kellyhp chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
I know it been a while but please update
| athemina chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
i really demand you write another chapter. here, i'll emphasize my desire to read more chapters:
WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. PLEASE.
| jlyric chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I've been looking for ages trying to find a a story with Lily and James alive/alternate universe but sadly they always seem to be discontinued...hopefully that is not the case with this story, because it seems really intersesting. Hope you update soon.
| Ginny278 chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
this is awesome! update soon please!
| choirsinger chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
update very soon!
| book-worm9008 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Its a nice start for a story! D im surprise Harry keep his cool, and James too! well i hope you keep on writing this really promising story! ]
| Winter Wisp chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
GREAT STORY! Plz update soon.
| PSTurner chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Great start, I look so forward to more. Yes, Harry's patronus would convince his Dad I think.
| Wonderfoal chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
I like it so far.
Just one thing - shouldn't that be October 31, 1981, not 1980? Is it a typo or have you changed it on purpose?
| EmeraldSeaFrost chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Great story but what about Teddy?
| deco chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
| LAGal chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Hey, like your story! Update soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Erylis chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
First, I'm sorry if my english isn't correct but I'm French and I don't speak it very well. I like very much this first chapter and I hope it will be a new chapter quickly.
| Aliolyoxenfree chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
coolio cant wait till next chapter update again soon!:D~ALi~
| jolly-for-heart07 chapter 1 . 8/13/2007