|Reviews for On The Ferris Wheel|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Funny as Hell loll
| Topaznik-Citrine chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
AW, poor thing! XD
Extremely well written. Two thumbs up! -
| Jak0TheShadows chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Hee hee! Yay akward 'friend' relationships. Poor Naota... there's no way he can be right whatever he answers.
| MiKe2vIcIoUs chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
Haha, those two are so funny together!
Great story, I loved it. That was just like them.
| Nema chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
It's pretty good. A nice little one-shot here.
| tasty cheez chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
i love it you got the characters nailed. but try to write somethin longer
| Pyroclastic flow chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
| Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Well isn't that cute. I might have puked if they kissed or somesuch. "Trapped in a ferris wheel" is quite a common rommantic scenario, but I'm glad you didn't go down that road. This is more like what they're relationship would be like. Naota thinking the look amusement in Ninamori's eyes was due to her contacts was one of my favorite lines