|Reviews for The Roaring Snake|
| rune1806 chapter 2 . 8/19/2007
the first two chapters bodes very well for what will follow, well thought out with a very interesting group of people for friends. harry will not be in gryffindor will he? i have felt he was more of a hufflepuff except for the charging in to save people thing j/k gave him.
| greatputt chapter 2 . 8/18/2007
Good start to a story so far. I am curious what voldie will do with the information he hears about Harrys upbringing and how similar it was to his. I am looking forward to seeing what you do with your ideas and hope you update again soon.
| Beth5572 chapter 2 . 8/17/2007
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
| violentMagician chapter 2 . 8/17/2007
minerva needs to be a bit more proactive in trying to open harry's eyes.
but you missed one thing - you did not make quirrel stutter while talking to harry and he is logically sure to notice during lectures at hogwarts.
waiting for an update
| David Fishwick chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Interesting pairing i like how the Potters want to look after their son if they die. Will Harry resist Voldemort and Dumbledore's schemes for him? please update thanks for a lovely start.
| mikek3332002 chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
An interesting start, waiting to see how you introduce the Slytherin Relationship
| Lord Nott chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
I like this a lot I hope that you continue!
| Belle Morte Rising chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Great first chapter, this looks like its going to be another great story, love the idea behind it and can't wait to see how a Harry/Millicent pairing goes.
As for the parents, that's tough my guess for
Hufflepuff - one of the parents of Hannah Abbott
Ravenclaw - i hate to guess this but i've always thought atleast one of Cho's parents would have been Ravenclaw.
Slytherin - oh that's even tougher, i'm going to guess a parent of Tracy Davis.
As for the muggleborns -
Hermione (Well i hope she's included, Ron's a prat and a perfect tool for Dumbledore with his jealous nature, but even with her know it all tendencies Hermione is a good friend to have).
I'll have to think about the other two muggleborns some more and message you when and if i decide.
| marka chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
Interesting so far, there are a few spelling errors but not bad. I like how Dumbledore was not too concerned for Harry but wasn’t seeking to kill him either only gain him to his side.
That said, I really can’t wait to see Dumbledore’s face when Harry is sorted in to Slytherin. Good luck with your next chapter.
| violentMagician chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
hm... not seen many harry millicent fics.
Rowling has described her as ugly in cannon you may wish to change that.
this concept of others try manipulating harry is most original. so please keep up the work.
if you need ever a beta then i am ready to help.
| Trelawney's Love Toy chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
| padfootjr24 chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
This is pretty good so far, when do you think the next chapter will be out?