|Reviews for Hero|
| slimmmeiske2 chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
So that's the end. I was a bit astonished when I noticed that the end wasn't just the death of Ganon, but a whole party and all. But now it's done and I won't have to look every monday for a new chapter :( Such a pity though.
I've had to read the last chapter in tiny bits, since the exams are almost starting (I just have 1 week, and they start!), but I hve to say that I'm very pleased with the ending.
(By the way I really thought Link would die)
Congratulations with the awesome story!:D
| Austln chapter 15 . 11/21/2007
very nice ending, hope you post a new story soon well cant wait for your next project, c ya!
| The 4th triforce piece chapter 15 . 11/20/2007
Still a good story. I am glad he didn't need the pendents to put the sword back in.
| thebenjamin chapter 15 . 11/20/2007
I've been reading this fic for a while, and I don't think I've ever reviewed so now that its over I guess i can't put it off any longer. This was just a phenomenal story from start to finish. I loved the way you led up to things and the overall description and character growth of Link. The reluctance to return the Master Sword were exceptionally believable. Ganon was portrayed rather well, though I wonder if his spell on the tower should have trapped his soul too. Zelda seemed believable, though I thought she might have a slightly larger role in the final battle (rescuing Link was a big step from captive, I guess). The storyline seems believable and how we get to explanations, despite if Zelda and Link truly comprehend them, worked out really well. Coming out on my birthday only gives the last chapter extra points :). Anyway, your story was really good and my only complaints could be the occasional grammar and spelling we all make (though you do very, very rarely) and that I hoped it would have been longer, but it probably works out best this length. Keep writing :).
| possessed obsession chapter 15 . 11/19/2007
*aplauds vigurously* I've read plenty of endings on and I have to say, this one was well done. I'm kinda sad that it's over and done - and I do want to ask if you might consider a sequil, although I have no idea of how you're going to do it. Especially since this was so great, you'd need to come up with one as good if not better than it for it to work. Or you could just make it different. Whatever. The point is, this is good enough to deserve tons and tons of praise, and if you do do a sequil, I'd read it, give my opinion, and then (probably) put it on my alert list.
Sankyuu for the wonderful story!
| flutekitty chapter 15 . 11/19/2007
Nice ending but now I have nothing to looked foward to on Mondays. Oh well I'm looking foward to the sequel if there is one. Till next time,
| I.K.A. Valian chapter 15 . 11/19/2007
Now that was an experience worthy of having. Nice ending. I realized when Ganon cast that imprisoning spell that he'd be caught in his own trap, to which a great amount of snickering on my part did not make any less funny. I wonder how long it will take for the Tower of Hera to disintegrate enough to release Ganon's spirit from the spell.
And that thing with Zelda taunting Ganon with the Triforce was great. That would be something that he'd fall for too. Hmm... I sense a sequel or an epilogue...
Thanks for writing a great story!
| Sweet Valentine chapter 14 . 11/18/2007
I really like this. Spent the last hour reading it. Very nice. Continue soon, I hope? :D
| Austln chapter 14 . 11/18/2007
nice new chapter, i think ganon is going to plunge the sword into zelda just as link opens the fairy so it saves her, and she acts as the way she was before the torture and is able to help link a little bit, but i dont know, nice new chapter cant wait for ze next one
| flutekitty chapter 14 . 11/14/2007
Wow...Ganon really is evil in this story. Also it looked like you rushed some of the story, but I can see why. Keep up the good work can't wait till Monday.
| I.K.A. Valian chapter 14 . 11/13/2007
Wow, that was one hell of a read. I'm flabbergasted... This is the kind of writing I want to do. I'll just have to keep working at it and maybe one day I'll be that writer. Anyway, Great story, can't wait for the update. I really like how Link's afraid of everything, it really makes the courage aspect of him all the more pronounced.
One question I have, though it isn't as imperative of a question as I might want it to be. What about the Triforce? I realize that without said artifact, Ganon and the Hero and the Princess wouldn't be here now, but those three triangles have to have some purpose besides preserving the souls of those three. Eh... I was just wondering.
| The 4th triforce piece chapter 14 . 11/12/2007
Good story! I like how its different every chapter you don't know how link is going to react next and It's not too naughty with sexual explict scenes since most stories either don't have a decent plot or a decent one filled with a lot of stuff eg. Exceesive cussing where you cuss when not needed) that dosen't really ned to be there.
2 I am surprised that link dosen't try to pick the locks in the dungeouns how come? I mean the locks are soo big you can stick your finger in them though I would use the tip of the Master Sword to fumble with the pins. I learned a little about that its mostly feel and listenl.
| Austln chapter 13 . 11/5/2007
awesome new chapter! i wonder if link will be a master swordsman or archer when he comes back (but i doubt it :P) nice new chapter, cant wait for the next one
| Sohma Satsuki chapter 13 . 11/5/2007
I can't understand why people just don't review. This is such a great story.
I mean, it's the best AU (AU still not AU xD) out there, and creative too! (let's face it, 90percent of the Zelda fics circle around the same idea, be it AU or not...)
Keep the great work!
(PS: I'm brazillian and think that this is a great story. I mean... I can barely speak english!)
| Austln chapter 12 . 10/29/2007
nice new chapter! i kept thinking link would go back in time, grab a potion or something and come back. cant wait for the next chapter, also cant wait for zelda/deku tree to see link.