Reviews for Zenith Degree
HelplessRomantic chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
aww... that is positively hilarious and lovely. you do an excellent job at writing, you know!

the fact that they're hesitant, and just... everything is so lovely. :D cute!
FlamesofaPheonix chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
hehehe YAY! Good story! :)
SweetSouthernGal chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
that was an amazing story! I loved it...fantastic job

"And Sirius and I will hide in a closet to try to see what happens" (I loved that line)

I've read a lot of your stories now, and I really like all of them, you're a good writer.
hermionegranger47393 chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
“Are you stripping, Potter?”

OMG I was ROFLing all over the floor! I LOVE this story, it is funny SOO much. :D

“We really shouldn’t be having this conversation on my bed.”

I love how Remus and Sirius have that tension between them. :D And the Lily/James is SOO cute. You write it excellently.

Remus gaped smilingly out of the crack of the door. “I – oh my god, Sirius – she’s leaning in! She’s leaning in!”


I adore the scene where Sirius and Remus are waiting by the door and they say:

“So whenever someone is alone, it’s a date?” “Basically.” They both awkwardly looked around each other, as though trying to find another being around, but they were indeed alone in the dungeon. “Back to the door!” Sirius called loudly after a few awkward silent seconds.


“That would be… inappropriate.” Lily said through the door.

“Hmm… so am I.”
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