Reviews for It
TheMistOfThePast chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
ahahahaha al walked in! omigod!
alchemichelper101 chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
very hot chapter...:)
Buni-San chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
(O.O) Whoa...

You can't leave it at that! Grr! Continue it or make a sequal! Haha

Seriously, this is just too good to leave alone!

I'll give you a cookie...!
Took-Baggins chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
wow! that got really intense really fast, didn't it?

poor Al, having to walk in on THAT!
reflecting chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
aurgh dammit you made Al come in -shakes fist- rewrite and up it to M! -growls-


jkjk lol it was great! :)
Inuchemist10 chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
WoW! That was hot, except poor Al bursting in!
Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
I can't believe Ishte found this story before me and didn't TELL me it was here! *giggles*

LOVE it. Love love. Oh, Ed, trying to restrain himself (itself?) but losing the battle at every turn. Is there going to be more? Please say there's going to be more. *grins*
Ishte chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
This story yay!

Seriously, it's really hot, and the end is just awesome too. Oops! hee hee.
FuyuSarah chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
That. Was. HAWT. And smexy. Oh my god. Hehehe. I can totally imagine Ed trying to control himself (yes, Ed, you get a shiny gold star!) and then totally lose it. And gyah that was so hot, and then... and then... and then it was hilarious.

LOL! Awesome job! Fave, definitely.
werxa chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
omg, omg, omg, omg, OMFG, THAT WAS G-R-E-A-T, poor ed and winry beeing cought kissing is enough but this!