Reviews for Through Endless Sands
Mauia88 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I like the progression and how the story is in parts. :]
Well done!
Ichiume chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
One word: Heartbroken.

Thank you for this beautiful piece.
Capucines chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
I'm speechless and I've got tears in my eyes. How sad and at the same time wonderful. It's just perfect. Thank you for writing this.
OedonWrithe chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
... *tears* legit crying right now. Fuuuu...
Iggy Valentine chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
I swear I'm not crying right now, it's just that there's something in my eye.
OrphndAcct chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Wow. Fantastic. Orihime! Ulquiorra! The whole concept of talking to the dead blooms of insanity, perfect! But, that is true for most people that to feel less lonely, talk out loud and hope to be heard. Orihime rubbed off on him! Grimmy is so bad boy quality with saying you are you talking to! Xd Lovely.
Lombriz-Solitaria chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
I... I want to say "this was wonderful", but now I think I'm empty. I think you stole my soul.

Can I have it back? Please? I mean, as wonderful as this story is, I feel kinda empty.

Although it's nice to see Ulquiorra heartless again.
Serendipithy chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Personally, I felt like you made the ending just... /right/, for the lack of a better word.

We all know, as readers, that it's impossible for these people (or variations of people) to live through all those injuries. It's a fact, though it is impossible to kill off the main characters without a happy ending.

So. I enjoyed reading an interpretation that was realistic. It makes more sense. I could have easily expected this in the real manga if I hadn't know better. Orihime's need to talk to herself while in isolation also works out, and it's interesting to see the effect she has on Ulquiorra.

Honestly, I just found this a wonderfully tragic piece. :)
Rin Sessys Girl chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
What a depressing tale, and yet I thoroughly enjoyed it. Though I myself like to consider myself a horrible romantic, this was, how you say, refreshing.


RSG (A.K.A. The Flamer Killer ~ Will give your flamers hell to pay! XD ~ Also Anonymous Reviewer Kagome with email and Sin Mortis from DA and Fiction Press.)
HetaliaMonster chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
This is really sad, one thing bothered me though; Couldn't you have made more moments between their love? It made it feel a bit... short...?
sakR9 chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
I remember reading this a long time ago...

I have a hole in my heart now. Absolutely amazing.

So sad, so poignant, so perfect.

Thank you for writing this.
NeonZangetsu chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Well, despite the fact that we KNOW that was not how it ended...this story was really, really good. So sad that everyone died, tho. Still, wonderful job.


iExperiment chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
...This is an amazing story. There was, like, ONE spelling error in the whole thing, and your composition is nothing short of fabulous.

...Poor everybody. :(

Its so sad they all had to die and leave Hime all alone...but the scenes where she talks to them is so sweet. And then she gets Ulli started on that...Maybe you could write a sequel to this... ? (hopeful)
fohiya5093 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
This was written some time ago, but the power of your writing is still drawing reviews. I loved this one-shot. The characters were lovingly delineated; the short, minimal nature of the structure and prose resulted in a quiet and almost intimate piece. Thank you for sharing.
Light Within Darkness chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Oh...oh my. My poor emotions are all aflutter over this piece. I adore your Orihime-she's the perfect picture of a strong yet quiet woman who affects Ulquiorra in ways he isn't comfortable admitting, and ends up changing him forever in the end.

This was just beautiful. I don't think I have any other, have a shard of my poor heart instead. :( *favorites*
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