Reviews for dizzy
Darfur Maxx chapter 1 . 6/18/2017
You did great with this, it's quite evocative.
Whinnie chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
DAMN. true and descriptive. not the kind of angst i was looking for , but still well written nonetheless.
Elendraug chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Holy fuck.

...well, I for one am impressed. Subtle and utterly terrifying. Everything I read of yours continues to kick ass.
Navie Chance chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Holy crap. That was amazing. It's so nice to see authors address the darker, more grown up side of Star Fox. Well done.
Ice Fox 111 chapter 1 . 8/23/2007

That's all I've to say.

Though I probably should critique it, I generally tend to not do so for one-shots...especially ones that I like as much as this. Everything's symbolic, and it's done in quite a professional way...I applaud you for this.

~Ice Fox~
Eytar chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Disturbing, and creepy in a psychological way. Short, but at least you've gotten something back in the old Star Fox section. I used to read your stuff. ;)
Neo3266 chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
It is horrible what war does to those who fight it... To deal with the insanity it deals almost makes you wish you were killed in that war...

BTW I am happy to be the first reviewer of this oneshot!