Reviews for Doomed?
DobbyWobby chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
this is really really good, i love it! it's really sweet.

dobby
scintillant.blackskies chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Very, very good. This story really takes the simplest words and phrases and turns them into... something much more, I think. The real strength in this story comes from the short sentences, that I feel say so much- outstanding writing. Amazing!
enigmaofherself chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I agree. Short but sweet. The best kind of 'short' - not something I usually enjoy. Hmm... i'll make an exception. ]
GoodyGoody23 chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
I loved it very much. Very sweet.
Alice-In-Wonderland101 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Ah why are you so good

not fair *pouts*

I love it to pieces one of my favorites!

Alice
Transatlanticism chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Cue "Aw" moment. That was so sweet! I'm a bit disappointed in Eclipse right now, so I'm glad I was able to cheer myself up with some cute fluff.

No criticism. It was good ;)

Christina (transatlanticism)
LiME-GREEN-CAPES chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
very cute and very sweet! i really liked it! :)
Alice chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Beautiful writing. )
Greekchic chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Beautiful! You have a great way of expressing things, almost poetic. You kept both characters in canon and wrote them beautifully. 10/10!