Reviews for Alliance
angelvan105 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
They ever so funny those two! Lucci and Paulie! good job!
iExperiment chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Awesome. Absolutely Awesome.

All there is to say.

...

Ok, maybe i lied. Lol. :3

I love Paulie's line of "Why the hell do you talk thru a pigeon?" and Lucci's answer for that. Especially considering his actual personality.

Very nicely done! XD

Expy
KochuKochu chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I've definitely enjoyed your story. It's so natural, Paulie and Lucci are so good written and this is so grateful.

Thanks for write it!

Take care! D

PD: Sorry for my English, it's not my mother language xDU
Shiruy chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I can so see this happening. It's kinda bitter how Paulie somehow knows that Lucci is going to cause trouble one day, but the interaction is also funny because they both seem to dislike each other so much. And then the pigeon... XD I'd be creeped out too, I think.
Solo Loco Ellingson-Rose chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Nice! Totally in character! Thumbs equal up.

"Paulie stares for a moment at the friendly, hulking bar owner with the interesting hairstyle, and then glances back at Lucci. Nah, that’s just paranoid. No way are those two working together."

Oh God, the pain in my ribs after I read that line was awful. I simply COULD NOT stop laughing. xD
tobi-chan66 chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
OMG!
animatedrose chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
Kawaii! I love Lucci and Paulie, and I love how Hattori talks. Kawaii! your writing is incredible! I love this pairing! I definitely love this story! Keep on writing!
Nehszriah chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Dude, that was sweet. I throughly enjoyed that. Heehee. _