Reviews for Raising Deidara
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 14 . 8/21/2014
You did a good job with making this as awkward as possible for the two of them. The fact that Sasori and Itachi kept fighting during the explanation is hilarious. I especially like when Sasori tells Itachi to watch his language, then swears himself.

Tobi had an interesting, and quite pretty way of explaining the process. Then it ended with some good humor as Tobi had no way to explain the next part. I bet Sasori really hates Itachi about now.

Nice work with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 13 . 8/21/2014
It's cute just how close the two of them have gotten over the years. It's also good to see that Sasori makes an effort to train Deidara, and even encourages him to use his skill of explosions.

If anything goes wrong, or becomes awkward, it's safe to blame Itachi. Sasori does seem to do that a lot.

Nice job with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 12 . 8/21/2014
Deidara whining about shopping and claiming it's for girls is funny. Still Sasori's line about Deidara maybe meeting a girlfriend while shopping is even funnier. It would be fun to see Tobi lecture Sasori for keeping little Deidara out in the rain. Nice job with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 11 . 8/21/2014
Sasori is a great father to Deidara. It's interesting that he admits there at the end that he doesn't want to give him back to his mother. Nice work with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 10 . 8/21/2014
Wow, this is a heartbreaking chapter. I can imagine what would happen if Sasori ever happened to run into Deidara's father.

The fact that Deidara trusts Sasori so strongly is sweet. I also like how he tells him he loves him, and as you mentioned, words he never said to his biological father (the man doesn't deserve the title of father). I also like that those words mean something to Sasori.

Nice work with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 9 . 8/21/2014
This chapter is a good mix of sweet and sad. To think an Akatsuki member had difficulty explaining something like death, but he is explaining it to a small child. The bit about Sayu being in Heaven is sweet.

How nice that Deidara decided to name the cat after her. It was unexpected, but a good twist to throw in there.

Nice job with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 8 . 8/21/2014
This is a cute chapter. The Tobi and Deidara bonding is sweet. Tobi may be childish, but he knows just what to do to calm a child down. The part where they both taunt Itachi on Tobi being a better babysitter is hilarious. Nice work with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 7 . 8/21/2014
This chapter is a good mix of cuteness and humor. Leave it to Tobi to find a loophole when it comes to pets. Him giggling while giving Deidara the kitten is cute. Still it's the squeal at the end that is the best thing about this chapter. Nice work.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 6 . 8/21/2014
What a sweet chapter. I love the thought of Sasori being a kind father to little Deidara.

The part where Itachi just handed Deidara over to Hidan without a word is pretty funny. It's also true to Hidan's character that he showed no concern over the child being hurt. Sasori did a good job of taking care of the injury and calming Deidara down.

How cute that Sasori comforted Deidara during the storm and even sang for him. Sasori is definitely going soft here, but it is cute.

Nice job with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 5 . 8/21/2014
That was pretty bold of Deidara to try that attack on Itachi of all people. It's believable that he would have that horrifying flashback when he felt he was in danger. It's good to see that Itachi put aside his anger at the moment in order to comfort a terrified Deidara. Nice work with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 4 . 8/21/2014
It's good to know that Itachi doesn't hate Deidara after all. I know Deidara is trying to be fierce with a glare, but it just comes across as adorable instead of scary. The part where he hugs Sasori when he enters the room is cute. Nice job with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 3 . 8/21/2014
In all honesty this is pretty much in character for Itachi. He seems like the type who doesn't want to be bothered with babysitting and would order his charge not to bother him unless it was necessary. Nice job with this chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 2 . 8/21/2014
How sweet that Sasori is being so kind to him. It is a nice contrast to the memory/nightmare of his father in the beginning scene. It also makes sense that he's scared due to all his father had done to him. In all, it's good to see that Deidara somewhat trusts Sasori by the end of the chapter.
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
This sounds like it will be a good story to read. The part where you mention that Sasori felt Deidara call out to him is an interesting detail. I'm already hooked, nice job with this first chapter.
m chapter 14 . 5/30/2014
oh my god

its been years since ive read this story and i just found it again

im going to cry because of all the memories ive had with this fic

thank you
thank you so much for writing it - even though its not complete. i hope ill find a way to contact you in the future.
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