|Reviews for Blood Berries|
| korijarrells chapter 3 . 9/28/2014
I cant finish this story... its completely cheesy. The way its written- not enough detail in some places and way too many pointless details In others- is god awful.
| passanger chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
If doing a few chores means "slavery", then you are either very spoiled, have very little imagination or havent heard how people in less prosperous countries live. This Bella lives in a house, goes to school, can do her homework, has enough food to survive, is able to work and even has her very own room. Many people would call her very fortunate. Her main problems seem to be her inability to find friends at school, codependency with her mother, self-pity and stupidity (why, exactly, hasnt she called child services yet? isnt she supposed to be miserable to the point of suicide? you would think she would have done something if things were that bad). If you want to see how well done child abuse looks like, do read Foundation or Joust by Mercedes Lackey or even When Daylight Dies and Jaded Eyes of a Prodigy from
| Amineh1825 chapter 42 . 9/19/2013
I would so love it if you wrote a sequel!
| Sceptical chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Why did she wait until Ashe was seventeen? In most states, she 's legal now, she doesn't have to live with her mother anymore.
| RDoster2012 chapter 41 . 3/31/2013
Hmm I kinda feel like a jerk now.. I was so caught up with the fact of the first ending I did not notice there was more... I would have loved to read about a wedding and it would of been fun to read about them in school...
But alas this is your story not mine...
| RDoster2012 chapter 40 . 3/31/2013
Really? You ended it here? What the frick happened to Bella? There is more to this that you should of played out.. it's sad when an author leaves things hanging like this..
It was a good story,don't really know why it's rated M... I just want to scream at this ending...
| Cici chapter 20 . 11/5/2012
The chapter,"Desire and the Fight" is really awesome but somewhat DISGUSTING!
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/20/2012
i love carlisle pov.. u should do him more
| Bitches-Love-Canons chapter 9 . 3/3/2012
Hmm.. i would make Edward do something so embarassing, he'd want to cry!
| Bitches-Love-Canons chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
his family is set on cockblocking him...·· XD
| AFRockStar chapter 10 . 12/23/2011
woop woop come to my house emmette ! :)
| lara90789 chapter 12 . 8/28/2011
you know i native so write anything mean about my kind please and good job on the book :)
| darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
keep up the good work
| mrs. cullen chapter 11 . 5/17/2011
all of the werewolves are douches. especially jacob. \ /
| mrs. cullen chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
are you british? ggghhh. i feel like shit. i have the stomach flu and a sinus infection.