|Reviews for ReWriting a Fairytale|
| Livvy22 chapter 14 . 4/20/2008
nice. Very Nice.
| doryfishie chapter 14 . 4/20/2008
aw! that is the cutest fairy tale ever and i love it! i think when we're younger, we all want the traditional fairy tales, but when we get older, we are able to appriciate more complex plots and whatnot...your fic did a very good job of keeping it a fairy tale, but more so for older kids. writing was consistant and fluent throughout the whole thing. grammer and all that crap was good from what i can tell (don't take my word for it, i suck at that kind of thing)
yeah, overall, i loved it and i hope you keep writing!
| doryfishie chapter 11 . 4/19/2008
wa! bed time sucks with a burning firey passion of YOUTH! i want to keep reading...stupid computer and internet, forever being turned off! i shall continue tomorrow! YOSH!
sorry, when i'm tired, i get all gai sensei/Lee...
great story! i'll review the last chapter and give you a nice long review, but the internet is gonna be turned off soon, so toodles!
| Itachi-kunsOneTrueLover chapter 14 . 4/14/2008
omg that was so cute! loved the story and everything!
| sakura ten'nyo chapter 2 . 4/13/2008
you know, this is so weird, butthis story really reminds me of the swan princess. you know, that movie musical version of swan lake? i just got that really weird thought in my head. did the movie inspire this story?
| kiuna'yukina chapter 14 . 4/6/2008
I love it..
Damn, you are a genius..
Everything about this story, from the plot, to the setting, development, dialogue.. Sheer masterwork of a genius.
I especially love the Gift of the echoes that you incorporated here.
I feel so.. relieved, so content, the way a reader does when a long read and endured story comes to a satisfied close.
Well done, this will be much remembered...
| Misaki Love chapter 14 . 3/30/2008
OMG i love this story, it's so cute
| Oinone chapter 14 . 3/26/2008
| anonymous reader-hehe chapter 14 . 2/11/2008
Hey! Hi! I know that you don't know me, and that maybe this review might be too late but, seriously, you're story was awesome. Reading is my hobby and I wish to buy a lot of books in my life. And if your story were a book, I'd really use my saving to buy it. Just want to let you know that you're really a good writer.
I'm a person that likes a sort of a hanging ending, but your story still was a good one. Hope you have more stories, especially SasuSaku . More power, God Bless!
| Vivian Verbose chapter 14 . 1/21/2008
Thanks so much for this awesome Fanfic.
It's been a real pleasure to read such a great piece of work. :D
I don't think your idea's too common, the fairytale thing, and even if it was, I don't think that many authors could have pulled it off with as great a writing style and story plot as you did.
Congrats for being able to make your story more in-depth, like you were able to tie in emotions to the actions and motives.
The only thing I would have to say was an error were the few typos that I saw every now and then, like "watch Reiji learn how to spare from her father" I think you meant "sparr" haha
But that's fine. Just little mistakes that need little refinement. :D
Thanks so much for an awesome read!
| Vivian Verbose chapter 6 . 1/21/2008
Your story is absolutely wonderful!
I love how you took a different twist on Naruto.
Sakura isn't helpless, and I love how you give little hints about who the "servants" are.
You're a very skilled writer and really imaginative too.
I can't wait to see what happens next. :D
| Shellyness chapter 14 . 1/16/2008
This story was breathtaking. I loved every single part of it! To your writing style, to just the way the plot went... it was amazing. At certain points I was literally sitting in my seat and holding my breath because I was scared Naruto or Sakura was going to get caught. XD
The ending was fantastic as well. I love how the epilogue was written as Sakura'a journal entries. o: The last line really took the cake as well. LOVED IT!
Excellent job on this story. favorites and throws confetti everywhere
| Miss Selene chapter 14 . 1/5/2008
this was so most romantic, adventerous, funny story of naruto ive ever read. you go man! its seriously the best ever!
| sakura ten'nyo chapter 14 . 1/5/2008
wow. that is all i can say. wow. beautifully written. i hope you'll put up another one. write on!
| Cassandra Nitewing chapter 14 . 1/4/2008
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! *Sniff*
I am so sad that it's over...
I can see a sequel to this though...
Keep up your awesomness writing!