|Reviews for Everything that Grows|
| Dyani chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
So, I really really like this story. :D It's sweet and gently funny and it's about Boq. There are few things better than that.
There were some spelling/grammar mistakes; Munchkinland is one word, "oversized" is one word, it should be "spectacles" at the end there... and this:
“Alright, I give up.” He said. “What am I looking for?”
“I don’t know.” Elphaba said, “What are you looking for?"
should look like this (with changes in parentheses):
“All right, I give up(,)” (h)e said. “What am I looking for?”
“I don’t know(,)” Elphaba said.“What are you looking for?"
You do the same thing with dialogue throughout, but I used that as an example because I really liked that particular exchange. :P It was really easy to envision all of this happening, especially the end after Galinda showed up. I love how she was basically joining in on scolding Boq for getting them homework, but he was too entranced to notice. And go Elphaba for coming to his rescue! :D
| MuchTooHighACost chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
oh, that was cool! is it a oneshot?
| grey-eyed-goddess chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
That was great. Simply great.