Reviews for Go Fish
CoraxOnyx chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Cute. Your dialogue is very good. This is much with the zany, which I like, but can't write for beans. Made me chuckle.
blood of the ninja chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
I don't want to sound picky, but I think this could be an even better story if you expanded it. I'd like to see some characterization, especially your fan-created character.

A very amusing story.
MegatronsSister-WolfDramaQueen chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Lol RUN! poor twins
Retired 5.01.2012 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Ehehehe, I really liked this one, too. :D
demisemiquav3r chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
XD you made me sign in! how dare you! lawlz but you're lucky, because this story is hilarious! i love sideswipe and sunstreaker's antics, and you did them good! great job!
suburban hero chapter 1 . 8/15/2007


Oh, Circuit Boards.

Sounds... steamy. -wink-
Lnzy1 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
lol. That was cute!
Psychic-Ghost chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Ouch, the poor twins. But it was a bad idea. Their bickering was pretty funny, though.
Yami-Yugi3 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
LaLaLand001 chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
I like it! HAha it was perdy! XD

update..plz :)
vericus chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
So simple...and yet so hilarious...and 'go go oilslick' made me collapse with laughter, right from the beginning. This...was great. I only wish there were more...
mmk7 chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
LOVE IT! _ :Huggles Sunny and Sides: