|Reviews for Delayed Reaction|
| Bymaga Jones chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
This is my favorite kind of BG story - filled with Kara whumping and angst combined with Apollo protectiveness and a lot of romance potential. This was written really well; you captured both Lee and Starbuck's voices and managed to include Adama, Dee, and Tigh. Well done.
| Anastashia chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
Definitely liked this. A couple of things that could make stories more authentic for me.
-hallway on a ship is referred to as a corridor or passageway
-"restart her approach" you could use missed approach, wave off, or go around
-pulling back - the use of degrees would imply an appraoch change of vector but if you were talking about speed you might use something like meters/second
Finally, if the CAG approached that burning Viper without a fire suppression suit I'd toss him in the brig. He's way to valuable to put himself in that kind of danger.
| JacobedRose chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Great story! I love their interaction. Great job!
| Maevenly chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
This was a sweet story - I especially liked the how you nailed Kara's bravado.