Reviews for Past, Present, Future
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
Introducing Tsunade-shisui. A cyborg if you will? A orochimaru experiment gone wrong? So captivating... now there is a story for ya. No sorry im just messing with you.. i saw the spelling error and couldnt help myself. You have potential as a writer, please focus on your grammar. You could go far
Bean and Pea chapter 2 . 3/15/2017
My mistake, Kohana? Still wrong.
Bean and Pea chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
Sorry, but right off the bat even the village's name is wrong. Konaha?
Glorious Ordeal chapter 7 . 1/27/2017
Your spelling is completely pathetic. Your usage is shit. You don't know the difference between "your" and "you're" the story is choppy and rushed. There is little to no development on the characters. Itachi is so beyond out of character it's ridiculous. This story is a fucking fail. So good job
Anime no Akuma chapter 28 . 12/27/2015
that was amazing, thank you for this fantastic story!
The Blood Thirsty Silver Wolf chapter 28 . 12/3/2015
LOOOOOVED IIIIIITTTTT!~said in a singsongesy voice~ I was on the edge of my seat during the last 3 chapters! XD Amazing! Your writing style has really improved from your first few fics. XD

~Wolfy-chan out~
Kakashi lover chapter 28 . 9/10/2015
So cute itachi is like my fav. character and sakura too they made perfect couple it was very nice.
Teyona chapter 28 . 7/11/2015
I looooved it! Ahhh that ItaSaku fluff had my dying from how cute it was! This story was just too awesome
BitWaS chapter 8 . 3/1/2015
Totally loved how you chose too introduce Anir if that is her whole name. You did it in a way that kept the mystery around her without over/under welling me (the reader) with information, wich is good.
LoL (Lots of Love)
BitWaS chapter 7 . 3/1/2015
I so do like this story. I haven't read any yet that introduces a "new" daemon like this it's really interesting. Going to keep on reading now even though I should go the bed... But I wanna know what happens next, you got me hooked on this thing. Keep wrighting!
KanyaLang chapter 28 . 12/20/2014
Jiamora118 chapter 28 . 6/28/2014
I loved it u r awesome I cried when konan died r.i.p
mischiefpuff chapter 28 . 5/18/2014
Meisa-tan chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Spelling and grammar is deplorable. And your Japanese... Reading "Itachi-neesan" made me stop and double check if this was some gender bender story. I don't know how people are even able to read through the first chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
What is kohana?
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