Reviews for commercials
13loves8loves9loves6 chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
*cries* OH NOES~! POR RIKU~! you can be happy to
DarkDeSkull chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
requisition chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
;~; Wow.

Poor Riku.

All depressed and emo.

Someone should make him watch a Teletubbies marathon.

Maybe he'd turn happy...

And here's a... what, 15 year old? Yeah, let's go with that. So here's a 15 year old excited and giddy over a...

cereal commercial?

... Mm-hm. They both need counseling.

I liked the one-shot, though. Short and depressing.

I also liked the... hm, style, I think is what I'm looking for. The way you had the story typed up and such. Worded, I guess.

Fav because I liked it and it made sense. x.o

I wonder if Sora liked the punch-line of this particular story, ne?
DaRk-HoPeLeSs-RoMaNtIc chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
what a sad story... this writting style works for u though. i think it's really good

Luvz, Lucas
FREAKSHOW1 chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Whoa. Um...interesting. Dead Riku. Nice.
Marita28 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Cool.. i really enjoyed your story. good luck with your writers block
Ivaeddia chapter 1 . 8/15/2007





My /god/ your writing is incredible!

I loved how Riku's last line completely fit, and completely made the story. I really like the new writing style, too. I think it really conveyes the insanity and fast-paced-ness towards the end.

I will never be able to look at those commercials again, by the way.

Great fic, and I wish you luck with your writers block!

Rio 2.0 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Wow.. That's ...

Fantastical. I really do like it! no I don't.

I love it!

So prettyful and ... there's blood and... .



Depopulating chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
... Huh.

...this seems like something I would write. It reminds me of my story Apathy, even though Apathy is more confusing and is more weird. And I didn't need to read this fic three times to get it. XD

Anyways. This was awesome. Evil commercials! Favs!