Reviews for The Apostle
Guest chapter 18 . 10/14/2016
*sniffles* oh my god this was good *bawls eyes out*
(doesn't help I was listening to the 14th's sad D:)
PlaidOtaku chapter 18 . 7/1/2016
Aww I love this story so much! I wish there was a way to make the Noah side and the Exorcist side in him coexist but I still love it so much!
PlaidOtaku chapter 2 . 6/30/2016
Omg I was laughing so hard at Kanda and Lavi bickering. Aww I love Road xD
Esmereilda chapter 3 . 2/14/2016
interesting I wonder if this is going to be allen/linalee or allen/road
Esmereilda chapter 2 . 2/14/2016
there she goes again over working herself
Esmereilda chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
I'm looking forward to what happens next
NightHunterDeath chapter 5 . 7/22/2015
...but there's already a Noah of Desire...and Allen's the Noah of Destruction...your hurting my head trying to piece the actual story with yours...
Yushininata chapter 9 . 4/12/2015
She is sooooooooo annoying!
If you do pair Allen with anyone, please do Allen x Road but... I'd Rather u do no one, And I just started reading this story sooooo...
hopper.codelyoko chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
doesn't make sense
at all
I read yo chapter 3/4/3.5 and I have a few issues
1) in Chap1 you mentioned that Allen died and had a grave: ok
then in that same chapter you mentioned that it was placed with Mana's grave:ok
What I have issues with is why you make it look/sound like they didn't have a god damn clue and make them look so shocked about it

2) you make it sound as if none of the Noahs know of the Allen before he became the Noah of 'Desire' and whatnot
so can I ask what timeline are you basing this on? cos you mentioned level 3s in the first chapter so it shouldn't be too far ahead
aka they should know Allen
unless you went through some major figure and face change and doesn't look like his old self AT ALL

your English is good
just your content and plotting I have issues with
I suggest re-reading the previous chapter before you write one next time
ascuteasme chapter 16 . 1/13/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, i like the bloody Allen better, why does he have to swich back to the idiotic Allen?

anyway, ah-hum, I love the story!, turly, but...I WANT THE HOT NOAH ALLEN BACK?! it is a good story, though
Snipperita chapter 6 . 12/18/2013
Waaa... Hoshino-sensei is a girl...
Shinome Akira chapter 18 . 8/25/2013
Awesomeness! And if there is, more please!
HiddenAngelWithWhiteWings chapter 18 . 8/7/2013
So awesome! Unexpected ending, I loved it!
Shirubagure chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I forgot this one more thing! Wasnt Sheryl the Noah of Desire? Was this before you knew about Sheryl? If yes I understand if not then what was Sheryl? Also does the fourteenth exist?
Shirubagure chapter 17 . 7/18/2013
One more thing, I know you said this was no pairings but I could see this as Yullen because of how extremely OOC Kanda was I was like... O.O...yeah but I know it was not Yullen I was just saying you made it really look like it was Yullen...
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