|Reviews for The Apostle|
| Yushininata chapter 9 . 4/12
PLEASE DONT PAIR ANYONE... SPECAIALLY NOT LENALEE ABSOULUTELY hATE HERE!
She is sooooooooo annoying!
If you do pair Allen with anyone, please do Allen x Road but... I'd Rather u do no one, And I just started reading this story sooooo...
| hopper.codelyoko chapter 1 . 3/3
doesn't make sense
I read yo chapter 3/4/3.5 and I have a few issues
1) in Chap1 you mentioned that Allen died and had a grave: ok
then in that same chapter you mentioned that it was placed with Mana's grave:ok
What I have issues with is why you make it look/sound like they didn't have a god damn clue and make them look so shocked about it
2) you make it sound as if none of the Noahs know of the Allen before he became the Noah of 'Desire' and whatnot
so can I ask what timeline are you basing this on? cos you mentioned level 3s in the first chapter so it shouldn't be too far ahead
aka they should know Allen
unless you went through some major figure and face change and doesn't look like his old self AT ALL
your English is good
just your content and plotting I have issues with
I suggest re-reading the previous chapter before you write one next time
| ascuteasme chapter 16 . 1/13/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, i like the bloody Allen better, why does he have to swich back to the idiotic Allen?
anyway, ah-hum, I love the story!, turly, but...I WANT THE HOT NOAH ALLEN BACK?! it is a good story, though
| Snipperita chapter 6 . 12/18/2013
Waaa... Hoshino-sensei is a girl...
| Shinome Akira chapter 18 . 8/25/2013
Awesomeness! And if there is, more please!
| HiddenAngelWithWhiteWings chapter 18 . 8/7/2013
So awesome! Unexpected ending, I loved it!
| Shirubagure chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I forgot this one more thing! Wasnt Sheryl the Noah of Desire? Was this before you knew about Sheryl? If yes I understand if not then what was Sheryl? Also does the fourteenth exist?
| Shirubagure chapter 17 . 7/18/2013
One more thing, I know you said this was no pairings but I could see this as Yullen because of how extremely OOC Kanda was I was like... O.O...yeah but I know it was not Yullen I was just saying you made it really look like it was Yullen...
| Shirubagure chapter 18 . 7/18/2013
I love how you made Road and Tyki love Allen as a sibling! That made my day the most! I love road,tyki, and Allen to be siblings or have some sort of bond! although I wonder what did Tyki said and will you make a sequel?! I believe this fanfic needs a sequel!
| Mukuro234 chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
Hehehe great fic I loved reading it
| KhaalidaNyx chapter 7 . 3/10/2013
I love it!
| HoneyCaramelSwirl chapter 18 . 2/1/2013
Daaw, I love how you added so much Kanda and Allen moments towards the end of the series. :DD Very sweet ending! . Awesome fic
| Sara chapter 4 . 1/17/2013
You know it's 3 am and I can't stop reading this. It's so interesting!
| KhaalidaNyx chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
| Soul Vrazy chapter 18 . 12/25/2012
Haha this is really interesting!