|Reviews for Dawn and May Make Their Moves|
| Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/29
Yes an Advancepearlshipping fic
| SceptileMan12 chapter 1 . 8/14
Man nice story you should do more
| NoName10 chapter 1 . 7/26
Great story. And I think Gary is the one who calls Ash Ashy-boy, not May. I'm not so sure.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/18
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/13
I know i am responding almost 10 years after this was made, but it still stands as my favorite fanfiction of all time, it is a little short but very good. Great job
| fetchandretrieve chapter 1 . 1/2
It was really good. I really love May. Shes adorable.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
| Pikachu chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
| anon chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
Hey 9000000000000 Kudos for that story. Quite gets a personas mind going? AMIRITE?
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
Awesome dude! :)
| motherfucker chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
Type your review damn good man.
| sandrai chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
love your work plz give shout out
| tom chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
Gary says ashy-boy not may