Reviews for Dawn and May Make Their Moves
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/20
This was ok... i was expecting a bit more of a dirty scene though 3.5/5
Matthew chapter 1 . 3/26
This story was a very arousing one to be sexual details were very precise and I got an erection from those and Dawn both having sex with ash got me very horny and I wish it was canon.
anonymous chapter 1 . 3/4
It was actually really good if you hadn't said anything I wouldve believed you wrote one before but it wouldve made the story better if you made the sex scenes longer and made the girls a little jealous of each other also you have an excellent character for ash thanks for the great story
Kawatti chapter 1 . 1/4
drew is cool.
Sex chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
More details on fucking
Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
Yes an Advancepearlshipping fic
SceptileMan12 chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
Man nice story you should do more
NoName10 chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
Great story. And I think Gary is the one who calls Ash Ashy-boy, not May. I'm not so sure.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
I know i am responding almost 10 years after this was made, but it still stands as my favorite fanfiction of all time, it is a little short but very good. Great job
fetchandretrieve chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
It was really good. I really love May. Shes adorable.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
Not bad
Pikachu chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
Fuck you
anon chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
Hey 9000000000000 Kudos for that story. Quite gets a personas mind going? AMIRITE?
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