Reviews for What Was, and What Will Be
NoilyPrat chapter 1 . 8/1/2018
WOW - great imagination, wonderful story. And Dean is now REAL. I love this!
BlueJude chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
Aw that was adorable! Without each other, Sam and Dean would have had a very lonely childhood. This was sad but heartwarming all at once. Thanks for the read!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
This story gave me the warm fuzzies. 3
eiralu chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
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Thank you. That was touching and beautiful.
Thank you.
borgmama1of5 chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
This kind of made my mind hurt...in a good way!
Tolakasa chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
I seriously love this story more every time I read it.
Mohoro chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Awwww sweet! ... And sad! This makes me want to cry. That Dean is someone Sam chose to have in his life rather than something that he has to deal with anyways is touching.
Thanks for sharing!
Madsouki chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Awww, I cried a little :'( this was great...poor Sammy, but now he has a brother :3
XXyukichan chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
I loved it XD well done!
LS chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
What a neat story! You are a wonderful writer, well done!
inebriated chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
This made me cry...
SaintsGhost chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
that was pretty freaking awesome!
Pinkchick chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
This was wonderful and so very, very creative! At first my thoughts were along the lines of, "Where's Dean?" because Sam never mentions until he meets him at Joshua's house. I'm wondering if the Dean Sam wished to be really was the spirit of his bog brother. And if Dean became real, what about John's memories?

I think what I liked most was Sam waking up and trying to look for the magic paper only to discover he can't remember what he was looking for to begin with. Like he'd woken from a dream and can't recall what it was he was dreaming about. Also, the fact that Sam was five years old and that's the age you really start to remember things vividly. And Sam remembering Dean and having him become real at that age made so much sense. I love the idea of Dean protecting Sam even when he wasn't real.

Some great lines:

"Yes there is," Sam insisted. "You'll see." He hesitated. Did ghosts know they're ghosts? Sam didn't want to do something bad like maybe make Dean cry by telling him he wasn't a real person. "I have to go away," he said, avoiding the real vs. not-real issue entirely. "But that's okay 'cause I've got this now."

Pulling himself up, Dean grabbed the branch he was hanging from and flipped over out of the tree, sticking a two point landing. Dust swirled out from under his sneakers. It looked pretty gosh darn real to Sam.

"You're going away?"

"Yeah," Sam said. "But you're going to come with me."

Dean frowned. He scuffed a toe in the dirt, a sheepish expression on his freckled face. "Sammy," he said (having overheard Joshua) "I don't think I can go with you."

"Yes you can." Waving the paper, Sam set his face in a stubborn expression. "You'll see." Tears welled up in his eyes. "You hafta, 'cause there won't be nobody to save me from black puffy demons and poltergooses if you don't."

He gave one last sniffle and took one last look at his friend, trying desperately to commit Dean's appearance to memory.

Truly, truly great stuff! I enjoyed reading! Thank you so much for sharing!
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Wow, excellent.
Mizra chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
That's an interesting take on how Dean and Sam met. It's possible.. plausible, I guess. I do like your writing style.
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