Reviews for The Affair of the Maou
haruko143 chapter 1 . 2/4
my heart aches... I feel sorry for Wolfram.I love your story
melodyz07 chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
That's so sad

I literally crying right now *sobs*

Oh God that's so beautiful. Wolfram came back for Yuuri at the end

I want to read about the second chance

I really do hope that you will write a sequel
melodyz07 chapter 3 . 9/1/2009
Beautiful chapter

It is really so sad...but I understand Wolfram

I mean what Yuuri did to him was just...cruel

He can't get back to him that easily
melodyz07 chapter 2 . 9/1/2009
Oh God this is so sad

I, myself, feel like crying -_-
melodyz07 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Oh God this is so sad

I am gonna officially kill Yuuri

If he tried even once to do "it", everything would have been fine

damn Yuuri and his prejudices
Ms. Yuko chapter 2 . 1/13/2009

I forgot to tell you that I haven't finish reading it... I'm glad that I found it by accident... i heard from other people that they both die how sad u_u... I still like it!
Ms. Yuko chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
OMG... I really didn't expect that would happen... Yuuri actually cheated on Wolfram... like the story very much...I like how the story is progressing... I hope they will be still together in the end... I want to kick that stupid woman for hurting Wolf... Joke!
anon azure chapter 4 . 5/8/2008
There's still a chance?

anon azure chapter 3 . 5/8/2008
Darn curiousity...
anon azure chapter 2 . 5/8/2008
I really think I'm gonna die any minute now...
anon azure chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
I think I'm about to die now...
Sayoko Bizen chapter 4 . 11/12/2007
Cheri's full name is Cecilie von Spitzveg, Takabayashi named her after the lest princess of Germany. Her name is not Cecilia.

Also, Nihonggo does not have a "w". If transliterated (meaning you are writing Japanese but using the English alphabet), it would be "aniue" which means "my brother"; "ue" meaning "my own". So goes with "hahaue" "chichiue" and so on.

Last of all, the world where Shin Makoku is does not conduct warfare with guns, so this fic kind of confused me. I was like, "where'd THAT come from?" lol.

the plot was poorly constructed, too. Yuuri just had an affair with some random woman and the reasoning as to why Yuuri just suddenly went back to Wolfram was barely plausible. Yuuri also just dropped his mistress just like that, like a cold turkey. Well, at least I suppose you had a good time writing this fic, because I don't see how this could have been written to please someone else.
LostForWords07 chapter 4 . 10/24/2007
Great story! I love it!

I hadn't expected them to die, it really came as a shock.

Do you have a sequel? *goes off to check*

Anyway, really good story.
Celeste-Hellgirl chapter 4 . 10/19/2007
No offense but that was quite a weird story...

But, you said that you haven't watched the season 2 that well, so I can give some consideration...

Sherry chapter 2 . 10/13/2007
An author's note in the middle of a chapter is something that you should not do. It's practically a cardinal rule for serious writing. And you managed to trample over that several times. Just seeing them sours the reader on your story and I have to say, I really can't bear to continue on because I really doubt it'll get any better.
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