Reviews for Seventeen
DolphinAunt30 chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
Lara.x chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
Really good. Like nothing I've ever read but so good and original Lara x
fourevertris chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
shiny ruby chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
I still love this so much that I just can't...
Blue Aidelle chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Lovely! :))
ThePerfectMess chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Perfect. x
Abandoned Account1111111111111 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
That was great. Amazing. But I'm too tired to think of a witty slash good review—sorry. I'm just too dang tired.
oh-heydare chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Beautiful. I love the way you wrote it, how all the words just seemed to flow together like that. This is amazing, definitely going onto my favourites. Wow, this is such a brilliant piece that you're still receiving a review after 4 years!
Amanda chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
wow your description of what lily is like is amazing! and the end scene is just brilliant! thanks for writing! loved your story .
papercranes chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Gah. Loved it so much. The world needs more fanfiction like these.

I want James Potter. I want him now.
Katie chapter 1 . 12/11/2010


Claire Lafleur chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
That was really really really very beautiful.

She cannot decide whether she should be worried or overjoyed that he inspires such behaviour, but then he winks at her and it doesn't matter

Ohh, I really liked this part... I don't know why, but I do.

Sorry for using the word really to much... Sorry, I did it again...
improved chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I loved this so so much! I really hope to read more of your Lily/James stories in the future.
silleri chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
these two essays are a terrific model on the characters of james and lily i often refer to these essays for writers to create stronger characters
crazyelf22 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
I love it! This was such a good read. It was in a very different sort of style, and I really enjoyed that. Very cute scenes between Lily and James as well. They're just so gosh durn adorable together. :D
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