Reviews for From the Celebrated Loins |
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evin chapter 3 . 3/16/2010 Heavey stuff. coulld you make scorp a little less... cocky? makes him to egotistic |
OrangeR0se chapter 3 . 4/12/2008 Enjoying the story, but in the title did you mean Lions? |
RainaPerun chapter 3 . 3/14/2008 Nice! I'm really interested in Scorpius' character. Will the Weasleys and the Potters accept Rose and Albus' placement? Biting my nails here, lol. |
DramaQueen1193 chapter 3 . 11/25/2007 Harry better be fine about it! He said he would! Please write more! ]] |
redfox1186 chapter 3 . 10/15/2007 noo! cliffhanger! hope to read more soon! |
Savage-Stiletto chapter 3 . 9/5/2007 o_0...Oh interesting... looking forward to reading more! |
stage.puppet chapter 3 . 9/5/2007 great story :) but at 11, do you think Rose wouldve had tow past boyfriends already, shy as you say she is? also, They're cousins! why don't they know each other? |
hciR chapter 3 . 8/26/2007 nice inversion, but u better continue it properly! and im sure u will, minor spelling mistake "we'll find up(out) soon enough". u trying to make scorpius/albus/rose the "trinity"? going to include any new guy? like mayb nevilles son or sth. Bear in mind that the idea of Slyterin as bad guys is firmly entrenched n we the audience will accept nothing less! D nice story writing, cya. |
DiamondOasis chapter 3 . 8/26/2007 Nice chapter i hope you update soon. |
Silverdancer chapter 1 . 8/17/2007 well, it seems slightly stilted, in the sense that it's not entirely natural, but i like it (: |
The Kunai chapter 2 . 8/16/2007 Heh, sounds rather cute. Scorpius seems OOC, not because I am adverse to his cheerfulness (I actually REALLY prefer a happy Scorpy) but because he admired Harry Potter because he slayed the death eaters...you would think he'd be a little sensitive about that since his father and grandparents were death eaters. xD But that's just me being nitpicky. Keep writing! |
hciR chapter 2 . 8/16/2007 quite nice. but i think the overtones of replication of e original story is too overt. ie. seems slightly too much like u r just subbing first-gen names for second-gen. but. nice building-up of suspense & characterisation. i look forward to thier adventures in hogwarts. rmb to go mug ur hogwarts facts properly hor! |
Hespiria chapter 1 . 8/16/2007 Scorpious seems so.. Happy? I thought Draco's snobishness might rub off in some way or another. Its an interesting chapter though, looking forward to more! |
DiamondOasis chapter 1 . 8/15/2007 Cute chapter |
Getsuei no Watarimono chapter 2 . 8/15/2007 Wow, this is really good. Scorpius does feel a bit out of character of what he should be but I like your version all the same. I also like were the story is heeading. So, keep the story going I really want to read more. Update soon! |