Heavey stuff. coulld you make scorp a little less... cocky? makes him to egotistic

Enjoying the story, but in the title did you mean Lions?

Nice! I'm really interested in Scorpius' character. Will the Weasleys and the Potters accept Rose and Albus' placement? Biting my nails here, lol.

Harry better be fine about it! He said he would!

Please write more! ]]

noo! cliffhanger! hope to read more soon!

o_0...Oh interesting...

looking forward to reading more!

great story :)

but at 11, do you think Rose wouldve had tow past boyfriends already, shy as you say she is?

also, They're cousins! why don't they know each other?

nice inversion, but u better continue it properly! and im sure u will, minor spelling mistake "we'll find up(out) soon enough".

u trying to make scorpius/albus/rose the "trinity"?

going to include any new guy? like mayb nevilles son or sth.

Bear in mind that the idea of Slyterin as bad guys is firmly entrenched n we the audience will accept nothing less! D

nice story writing, cya.

Nice chapter i hope you update soon.

well, it seems slightly stilted, in the sense that it's not entirely natural, but i like it (:

Heh, sounds rather cute. Scorpius seems OOC, not because I am adverse to his cheerfulness (I actually REALLY prefer a happy Scorpy) but because he admired Harry Potter because he slayed the death eaters...you would think he'd be a little sensitive about that since his father and grandparents were death eaters. xD

But that's just me being nitpicky. Keep writing!

quite nice. but i think the overtones of replication of e original story is too overt. ie. seems slightly too much like u r just subbing first-gen names for second-gen.

but. nice building-up of suspense & characterisation. i look forward to thier adventures in hogwarts.

rmb to go mug ur hogwarts facts properly hor!

Scorpious seems so..

Happy? I thought Draco's snobishness might rub off in some way or another. Its an interesting chapter though, looking forward to more!

Cute chapter

Wow, this is really good. Scorpius does feel a bit out of character of what he should be but I like your version all the same. I also like were the story is heeading. So, keep the story going I really want to read more. Update soon!