Reviews for Rhythm and Blues
Daisuke Akio chapter 5 . 4/16/2009
Okay, so here's my [promised] review: Other than one teeny tiny error - one word is missing (I won't tell; it's obvious) - it's an excellent chapter. I'd usually complain about the lack of transition, but I think it kinda works anyway, so what the heck :D

So sorry about those lost pre-made chapters. If they were already done, I should've been reading five more chapters... right? *winks* But since you are beginning to have more free time *more winks*, I guess you can update faster than one-and-a-half years? Haha xD
Tinny chapter 5 . 4/5/2009
well written chapter sweetie! i really liked the part where you explained who's next to who and stating the reason why they are in the detention hall hehe..

i also like the part where domon and recca were arguing...hahaha XD

omg! i like your cliff hanger dear :D and yes! it's too short gosh darn it! lol you need to make it longer because you are driving me crazy! hehehe

job well done!
TuckingFypo chapter 5 . 3/30/2009
Kyaa! I love this fic! (Too bad I only noticed it today. XD)

And...I think I know who wrote the poem due to the hidden clues on a chapter...but I'll just shut up now so I won't spoil the fun. :D

Update soon!
satomika chapter 5 . 3/30/2009
i hope it was fuuko's handwriting...


update soon, k?
Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 5 . 3/30/2009
Oh I'm so loving this story! update soon!
Eirist chapter 5 . 3/28/2009
finally! you've been away for a long while. hehe! i like the recca & domon's bickering about the percent thingy. haha! the chapter's a bit short. you see, i really wanted to read more. ehehe. glad to have you back here in the fandom! :D
Bluementrit chapter 4 . 10/19/2007

i'll wait

carriecter chapter 4 . 10/15/2007

Update asap ! x]
yan-chan chapter 4 . 10/9/2007
so sad.. :(

poor fuuko. it's such a contrast with the beginning of the chapter when they were teasing and stuff and towards the end, they were conforting each other. life can be a trial at times, huh?

update soon!
Daisuke Akio chapter 4 . 10/8/2007
Honestly, I haven't heard of that nursery rhyme... Which means... I must've lost my childhood touch too early back in the day. XD

Oh, excellent chapter btw. And that was a great thing to start a transition - with an apartment bill! Make Tokiya continue with his sulking! Whoo~

tin chapter 4 . 10/1/2007
waah! BEST CHAPPIE so far! grabe! me love it!

kakakilig...not only that, i mean, just thinking about tokiya singing for her...*faints* lol

and from what i envision, i see her curling into his lap while he hugged her and sung to her...waah! ganda! i approve i approve! (lol, like i never approved before XD)

your diction's good too...very easy to read and...just...wonderful!

good job!.
Nils chapter 4 . 9/26/2007
mou, i feel bad for fuuko. but no need to worry, i guess. there's mi-chan to her rescue, rite? hehe. nice story. update soon!
Blackrose2005 chapter 4 . 9/25/2007
Wow, what a nice chapter! It's a little OOC that Mi-Chan would sing, but heck! he must've really sounded good... if only I really could hear him sing... xD Pls, do update soon!
Dylan chapter 4 . 9/25/2007
'will wait for the next chapter! please update soon!
winoa13 chapter 4 . 9/25/2007


I LOVE IT! It's so nice and cool...i always though the Hokage could be a good band...anyway...Sad for sad...anyway...the part with the appartment bill made me laugh..and i wasnt supposed to laugh because the aura of the house is so silent..haha!) GoodLucK aNd please upDatE soOn!)

-aiRa WinOa-
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