Reviews for The Grapevine
MIME-MEMI chapter 9 . 4/1
In the Epilogue, I wish to see what happens to Niou or what will he do to Tomoka (with Kaidoh by her side). I also want to see Miyuki beat her brother into plup. And I hope Inui had answers for his questions. and more etc.
MIME-MEMI chapter 9 . 3/27
My expectations in the epilogue or the scenes I want to see/read:I want to see Chitose Miyuki beat her brother(Chitose Senri) into a pulp. I love RyoSaku(You know already what does that means but its okay if it is’nt concluded). I want Inui get his question’s answer and also the character’s(all characters or almost) curiosity. I imagine all these things and also I also imagine many more like all or almost of the characters are in the festival. I wonder how Akutsu Jin was? And I also imagine many more. But I think I must end here now. Good luck for your fanfic. It was soooo good!
MIME-MEMI chapter 1 . 3/27
Gyahhh!That’s so amazing!You’re an amazing writer y’know. Right now, I’m thinking about the epilogue. If you may, can you at least read it. Maybe I will be dissapoint if it did’nt reach my expectations.
Yuna chapter 7 . 8/9/2013
This story is downright hilarious!
I cant stop laughing out loud while reading. You're awesome! :)
AHEcstasy chapter 8 . 5/12/2012
You NEED to, absolutely MUST, no doubt HAVE to finish this incredible story. Please Please Please Please Please! This story makes me sooo happy, and it's this close to being absolutely perfect. All it needs is an epilogue and TA-DA! One of the best, most entertaining stories I've ever read. I don't know what kinda incentive you need, but I hope this review is enough! PLEASE UPDATE!
Gregory99 chapter 9 . 5/9/2012
Please update!Q.Q
suchrandomness chapter 9 . 10/7/2011
Wow - seriously the funniest story I've ever read, couldn't stop laughing aloud.

This should so be done as an episode for the anime, lol - I'd pay good money to see this all happen.

I hope you plan to write more stories like this one sometime soon :)
laughsandgiggles chapter 9 . 8/21/2011
I hope you get to that epilogue soon, and maybe even a sequel. Yes I'm being selfish, it's just that I love your writing style and that I adore these kinds of stories. When all the tennis teams get involved in this mass confusion. It was simply great. Please try to at least finish off the story!
kiwibkute chapter 9 . 7/5/2010
Haha! This has been thee best story I've read in a long time. It is so well written and so so funny. I only stopped laughing to catch my breath through this entire thing. The twists and turns and meetings of fate were all so much fun and I just couldn't wait to see how everything was resolved. You did a great job and I'm glad you came back and finished it till the end. I can't wait for the last chapter cause I seriously want to know how Niou was involved with all this? So yes this story is just brilliant and you did a great job! I only wish I could come up with a plot this complicated and fun so even though it was tough, thanks for hanging in there and doing it all. Ok well I could go on forever about the amazingness that is this story, so just one last great job and love it!
greenteamoose chapter 9 . 6/23/2010
YAY! You got to the end where (almost) everything is sorted out in true koffee/PoT style. Niou in the security room is awesome, once again.

My favorite part is when all the tennis players manage to squeeze into the flower shop:

"She spotted a few Shitenhouji boys climb on top of the counter, Sengoku fighting his way towards the women, and Eiji trying to climb a small palm tree. Somewhere in the midst of all the pushing and shoving, Sakuno swore she heard Atobe demanding a five foot radius of space around his royal person."

And of course:

"Ooh. Flowers."


thesadisttensaifuji chapter 8 . 5/3/2010
Nice story once again, I can't help but review once more!
I wonder what 'plan' Niou is talking about, and who said 'Mission accomplished' at the end.
And, I'm waiting patiently for the epilogue.
You have interesting OCs by the way.
Great job again!
Rialaea chapter 9 . 4/29/2010
Very interesting and quite funny. I enjoyed this story, an I look forward to the promised epilogue.
BleuFleur chapter 9 . 4/28/2010
Aw...Niou's a closet romantic! And after Tomoka punched him out, too. And haha! I knew Yumiko was the shop's sponsor. I don't think that was ever spelled out before. Considering how all problems are settled with tennis in the series, Inui wondering why they didn't use tennis balls as weapons literally had me cackling out loud.

You did an incredible job. I'll look forward to the epilogue/last chapter.
BleuFleur chapter 8 . 4/28/2010
Poor Tezuka. Between Inui, Tachibana and Miyuki, he had no chance of escaping the insanity. And the moment when it's announced that Fuji is, ahem, sleeping with An-chan and a certain duo's reaction - I don't think that could have been executed any better. Inui admitting to Yanagi that he was trying to make the situation worse at the end was like the cherry on top of this delicious chapter.
BleuFleur chapter 7 . 4/28/2010
Another truly awesome chapter. I have no way of picking out any moment as my favorite, because it's the way everything is intertwining that I'm most impressed with.
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