Reviews for Toy
Guest chapter 4 . 1/10/2013
omg... damn orochimary ! damn Mari ! I think you should have made Mari Sakura !
minnieblossom chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
CONTINUE PWES?
ahjah johnson chapter 4 . 7/31/2012
that was good where the other foreal
naruXhina1000xoxo chapter 4 . 12/30/2010
i love it so far! but the only thing that i think would make it a little more clear is if u make hinata stop stuttering so much! i know thats sort of her thing and all but sometimes its really hard to understand what shes saying and would make her seem more stronger as a character if she could actually speak a full sentence? I know this is about hinata being forced to be a toy and have sex and everything but i think it would make ur fanfic more realistic and longer if hinata would not always give in into having sex with sasuke all the time! i mean it would be nice to read how sasukes love for hinata dosnt always has to do with having sex with her and is more emotionally then physically all the time? lol but other then that it was really good and i hope u keep on writing i cant wait to find out what happens with hinata and sasuke!333
crookshies chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
nice nice
blackrosepb chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
Really good story:) i luv sasuhina and thats how it should be and not naruhina:( this story is one of my favorites:)
The.Usual.Angst chapter 4 . 12/10/2009
omg omg omg omg omg I WANT MORE!

hahaha i loved it althogh i just started reading fanfics earyer i the mounth so what do i know any way right?
phobia97 chapter 4 . 11/11/2009
Wow...I am starting to get really sucked into this story. I love prisoner falls in love with captor kind of thing! Please update as soon as possible.
inadey chapter 4 . 6/1/2009
update this it's really gud

man those 2 do it alot and its only the 2nd day wow they fast

well i can't wait till they relaize they love each other
in your dreams as well chapter 4 . 5/8/2009
plz update soon its great
shatteredmyths chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
I love it...:)
Baby-Grimm chapter 4 . 12/23/2008
Great story!

oh btw, i wouldnt like that mari girl to have sasuke, EVER!

so please dont do any of that! sasuhina only! xD

i'm looking forward to your next update! preferably...in christmas so it'll be as a 'gift' lol. thanks for sharing!

xx
pompompuem chapter 4 . 8/20/2008
UPDATE! UPDATE!
Starberrymint chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
It's a good story! Very nice...only when Hinata stutters, you might wanna put hyphens( - ) inbetween, orelse it's hard to read. Orochimaru and that sick Mari are just wrong. I wonder what they plan to do...
Victoria Secret chapter 4 . 12/2/2007
omg make more please...
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