Reviews for End Game
Laesk chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
you should do another chapter or story about the others views, about what happens after. it would be interesting to read. thank you for sharing this with us all. sad but interesting. I hope you do another chapter or story on their views. I am sure others would love to read that as well.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Screw drowning, I want to go out like a badass. Riding a bomb straight in a whorehouse. Yup, I go out in a blaze of glory while ridding the world of a few more sluts.
TemariArisaka chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Beautifully angsty.
lexi100531 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
That's a really good story
Ally chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I loved it, I didn't cry but loved it..It almost made me cry, really good.
Count T.G. Cid chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Ouch, I almost fell like I just got mugged, a excellent tragedy, that would probably evoke an emotional response for Sai. The best thing about this fic is, its making me think about many thing that make me uncomfortable. That's a good thing because I believe uncomfortable thoughts are what you learn the most from. I'd say more but I'm too lost inside my mind...

Count Cidolfus "Thundergod" Orlandu
aims123 chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
it would be great if u could sakuras and sasukes side of this fic as well
Kyoki no Kage chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
wow...this is just amazing...

its as if youved died be4... it was one of the coolest suicides stories ive ever read...
hanipman chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Nice job. I like how you portrayed Sakura perfectly, her able school smarts but unable to read a practical situation. I also like how such a drastic action like suicide forced Sasuke to actually show concern on Naruto's well being.
Imperial Dragon chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Sad but good.
sasunaru-Yaoi-Fangirl-Wolf chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
this was a great story i loved it but i think at the end to me i think u should uf have one persons thoughts but at in all this was great
Blood Zephyr chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
You should write about what happens while he's drowning and after wards...Like when Kakashi shows up or something...
RakeeshJ4 chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Hmm. Another good one shot, but quite strange, too. I think the thing that is missing is some inkling of *why* Naruto is doing this.

Not that there aren't many potential reasons, of course, but some hint one way or another which one or ones finally did the job of persuading him to end it.
TsukiHokori121 chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
wow...that was awesome! except for te suicide thing cause suicide isnt cool but that was a great story!
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