Reviews for Fall Away
mary a chapter 5 . 11/11/2014
What a great story! Love the twist! Thanks for writing!
melanthe lilac chapter 5 . 10/14/2009
You completely fooled me; I had definitely not expected that ending! Well, maybe in the first chapters, before Daniel got sick, but this was so surprising! In a totally good way, of course. And slightly bittersweet, because if someone had to go mad and hallucinate his friends dying around him, it had to be Jack... *pets him*

I'm an apocafic fan, myself, and although it was a bit gory for my taste, this was faboulously written! *flails just a little in fangirl squee* :)
Jyulin chapter 5 . 10/19/2007
That was such a kickass fic! Great job!
Zoser chapter 5 . 8/26/2007
Thank goodness - I really enjoyed your story.
Zoser chapter 4 . 8/26/2007
'The bundle felt heavier with each step in a way that was not just physical weight. Jack felt like he was carrying his own failure down the slope with them.'

'Daniel was the keeper of their words and he was gone.

He'd taken the words with him.'

Thing can't get much worse but I expect it will.

Very well written!
Zoser chapter 2 . 8/26/2007
"Jack felt like he couldn’t breath" - me too. This is painful.
Zoser chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
very interesting
pain in the mikta chapter 5 . 8/24/2007
Great going! Impressive and well written! Bravo!
Kaytee33 chapter 5 . 8/22/2007

nice work :)

to be honest though, I would've liked to see this last part expanded a bit!

maybe an "extended edition", or an epilogue?
getcarter chapter 5 . 8/22/2007
Wow, ok I was not expecting that at all. Great job!
nexis44 chapter 5 . 8/22/2007
had my thoughts that this may be where you were going with it, but i started to come up with some other ideas. glad to see that i was somewhat right. great job:D
ScruffyLovin chapter 5 . 8/21/2007
Yay, everyone's not dead! :) But poor Jack got sick! x_0; Yikes.
jaj chapter 5 . 8/21/2007
Oh, thank you for bringing them all back!
Neiths Arrow chapter 5 . 8/21/2007
Bravo! I really liked this story. Yes it was dark, but well worth the read.
Emry Wild chapter 5 . 8/21/2007
Freaky! But well done!
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