Reviews for Unexpected
WayLowHalo chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
Hm, maybe you could make Neal's kid become a knight... and a healer like his dad! That'd be cool. Yeah, don't really have many ideas for Neal and Yuki's kid but I have faith that you can do something good if you're so inclined. Yep. Happy writing!
Equilly chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
This was an awesome story... but sad! You portrayed Kel really well.
SarahE7191 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
OMG! I love it! It's so sad, I just want to cry. But it's not set up like a oneshot. It's set up like the prologue to a story. You should have Neal's daughter become a knight, like Irnai (is that how you spell her name?) prophesized.

WayLowHalo chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Yay, it's posted! Good job my friend and I'm still amazed that you actually killed him! You can NEVER EVER get upset at me for killing a character EVER again, is that clear? LOL!

Anyway, good job and I'll ttyl!
girlcalledsun chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Ever so sad; good tension and Kel acting in character. But so sad!
bubblescanfloat chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
you made me cry

that was so sad

and so well written

and so good

and it made me cry

I love it so much

even if it made my cry