Reviews for Monotonous Pizzazz |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I hated L's death scene TT_TT but I alwys thought Raito's smile at the end was something of a parting gift so that L would know he had been right all along- mystery solved. If Raito had pretended to care and cry then L would have gone to the grave still unsure which would have been worse for him I think. Anyway lovely little drabble, I can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() aw, that image is amusing and cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this (chapter 7) has to be my favorite one. CUTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poison fond of this! The first few chapters were hilarious, and then right after that was the angstiness thingies... I'll be waiting for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I adored that last scene- just a hint of something quite delicious I must say ;D Would it be rude to ask for more based around their getting together period (read: Makayla's not-so-secret love) I'm a sucker for it I'll admit Update soon! (well a little sooner than four months anyway XD) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heehee L's having naughty thoughts (or he will be tonight ;D;D) I liked the style of this, the words flowed toghter like a sinuous snake, and the ending was the perfect point _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... I liked the little soundbites in this one- espcially the last one. And yes, I could see Raito thinking in this way *nods head* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everybody collective AW please! That was cute _ a little OOC but cute nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bribe the genius detective, bribe him... works everytime XD The prefect follow-up- much loveage _! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do like being cruel to L don't you XD - it is funny though. I think you've L down quite well- he just cannot resist the cookies XD and I loved that last line- it was the best XD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD Oh poor L- hah this one had me giggling- I'd love to see that happen XD- although knowing L he'd probably just wear them anyway- wow I want pictues! Nicely written too, thumbs up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! lxlight's the best! these little stories are so cute! especially the one with the cookie..and the red tie..hehe. please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Make MORE! XD lol. they are so good. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job so far! |
![]() ![]() nice. more kissy kissy! XD ~CHU! |