Reviews for Survival
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
Your spelling is horrible but the story was great.
VampireKitty34 chapter 1 . 6/29/2016
I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
Do you even grammar? Do you even pronunciation? Do you even English language?
ZoNami chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
Great i loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Lots of grammar mistakes.
But it was so cute I overlooked those. Otp.
anime ghost girl chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
wow nice story u made
scribbles of madness chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Pretty good oneshot :)

Mm, I noticed several spelling and grammatical errors (i.e. "got aware" is supposed to be "BECAME aware"). Also, they were a bit out of character; now I know that we're just little fanfiction writers who write out our fantasies about our favorite shows, but we still use the creator's characters. Zoro doesn't cry and Nami doesn't take Zoro's threatening facade seriously.

Keep on writing! :)
grimmy lover chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Good job :D
blackrose chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
wow i'm 15 an i love it
dragongoddess13 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
awesome story excellent lemon but you should work on your spelling a grammer
Shade the Bat chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Good lemon.
Pocket Vampire chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Oh! So porny! It rocks!
low-ponytail chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
whao! :O it's hawt!
Sanji-perverted chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
I bet you were turned on writing this XD

or either you have been trough that sex. Because you sure got it porny, LOL

good job.
tea chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
this is awsome

i havent read a ZXN in a while that is this good