Reviews for Deprivation
MiniKirby123 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Loha! Mini here.

I loved it so much! It was so sweet, and the descriptions (i.e. Annoying one, ect.) were funny, even though I knew that Haruhi would never forget their names. After reading several of these MoriHaru fanfictions, I have realized that they are slowly and steadily becoming my favorite pairing. This actually kinda made me choke up...

How do you write so long?

P.S. I tried to attempt to spell stuff the Australian way, but they wanted the American Spelling. So...


WolfChild111 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
This is lovely, thank you for sharing it :)
Aryenne chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Chidori no Tenshi chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Wow, this was so touching. I'm not sure I can describe how I'm feeling right now with words; I guess you can say that I'm feeling a little nostalgic, that I need to go watch/read some Ouran...or perhaps you could say that I'm a little sad that everyone is so separated now, though it's logical...but most of all, I think I'd have to say that I'm feeling very warm.

This story, in general, kind of rambled on a little. If not for the beautifully-woven plot, I may have gotten bored. However, I believe that this rambling is somewhat inevitable, since there was no dialogue involved, so nevertheless, I am very impressed and happy with this story.

I'd never truly liked the MoriHaruhi pairing before, but I can see how they'd go together so perfectly now. Awesome job.
loretta537 chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
i love this story, for some reason it appears i didnt review it before but i do love it and reread it everyonce in awhile.
Rayne Hunter chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
You did good. Seriously, really good.
cattyliu816 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
it's so long! i got sad for the middle part, but when he came home, i got happy. (sorry that was the worst grammar i have ever seen myself write)
D chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Whoa, that was good. Scared to mention more that might make your fic seem less than it really is.

Sedgehammer chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
I totally get what you were saying about Mori's teeth. I don't imagine him with them, either.

And I like the way you've added emotion to Haruhi's character. It really hit close to home for me, since I have that sort of can't-bear-to-be-without-you, comforting and calm relationship with my boyfriend. And I love the sound of his heart beating.
Amazonian21 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
I like the rhythm and patterns in this story- it is very well written.
JenNom chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Beautiful! Loved it, great style.

The 'stoic' thing also confused me temporarily, but I'm still making this a favorite.
lizza of the west chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
This probably is one of the best fanfics I've read for Ouran so far. Great job, it really captured my attention.
Sambucivox chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Nice and dense; I thought that she was married with Kyouya at first -because "Stoic" is the adjective that usually goes with Mori. However, it's fitting.

It was nicely written, so I put it in the archive. I hope you don't mind.

The ending reminded me -a bit- of Lilo and Stitch.