Reviews for Confounding
darkangel1992 chapter 8 . 12/27/2008
awesome story hope you update again soon :9
Shuu-kun chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
i dont think its done yet T_T

maybe shuu/ren is more important ...
amante chapter 7 . 3/14/2008
is it finish
Madame Hearts chapter 7 . 10/17/2007
nice chapter
Madame Hearts chapter 6 . 10/9/2007
nice chapter
lacyrelic chapter 6 . 10/6/2007
bad renji, *smacks with fan* bad. whose to say it isn't straight. only you and your plot bunny (i'm calling him mark) know what happeens next and if there is a big blowup later we have a xute sex scene out of i wonder if there is a reason that ichiren's scene is less descriptive then shuu's (like sex w/ shuu was more important to ren than ichi).
StunningSpellRocks2345 chapter 6 . 9/29/2007
i like it update asap
Demon Vampire180 chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Don't know how well I can critique but there are a few things I'd like to mention. In the first or second paragraph, you forgot to capitalize "Kuchiki Rukia". And you may want to look it one more time. There were a few punctuations missing. The pace is a little bit fast to.. Try adding in some of the battles. Sorry. I don't want to be mean about it. It's a great start though. Sorry about not being more help. And oh, this line completely confuses me He would think immediately of Hisana but he could still see in his minds eye taming the powerful ryoka and no less in his bed.
Deetra TaFoy chapter 6 . 8/21/2007
Wow. It's like a soap opera. Only with pretty anime people so it's tons more fun.

I like it. There are a few spelling/grammar issues, but it is a nice story.

I had to try hard not to cry there at the end lol. Good job!
EmbersSpark chapter 6 . 8/20/2007
aww i think im gonna cry D:

good lemon tho
CocaineFilledKisses chapter 5 . 8/18/2007
AW!

IT'S OVER?

*glomp*
CocaineFilledKisses chapter 4 . 8/18/2007
YOU ARE SO GOOD!

I lurve your writing!

Aw, Shuu-Shuu-kun is hurting...

I'LL FIX IT!

*glomps him*
CocaineFilledKisses chapter 3 . 8/18/2007
AW!

SO KAWAI!

I thought that they wouldn't be together!

Then I'd have to say:

BUT THEY HAVE TO BE!
CocaineFilledKisses chapter 2 . 8/18/2007
*gasps and claps hands to face*

OH...

MY...

GOD!

SO CUTEE!

Especially tha smut!
Pickle Reviver chapter 5 . 8/18/2007
Sorry, but I prefer Ichi as uke. , But it's still a very good story, nicely written and good storyline~!
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