|Reviews for The Charge|
| thefiretree chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
I love how you are able to write in a different person's POV and still make it as poignant as if it were the people being directly affected. The mark of a truly amazing author.
FANTASTIC JOB! :D
| HermioneRon 4ever chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Yay, Jasper! I want to read more stories of him now! Happy Writing!
| unorthodox yo-yo chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Poor Jasper. We don't know enough about him from the books.
| Twinkling chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
Awesome! That was perfect! Thanks for sharing. :)
| laneykin chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Aww thats so cute.
Poor Jasper has to try so hard to be "vegetarian!"
| RandomPersonOfDoom chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
| abovetherim chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
AWESOME! Great job!
| The Deadly Sins chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
I thought that Jasper left the room? But still a great story.
| jerseygirl12247 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
All of your stories are absolutely amazing! This is truly what Jasper would be feeling the entire time. It makes me sad to think about his life and how much he still has to endure.
| RosaLeeMullins chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
But I'm no Edward.
hahaha, I definitely love that line!
okay, you see, this is absolutely amazing. i finished reading overnighter, and useless, and you get me every time.
it's so very rare, especially recently, to find really good stories regarding twilight. and every single one of your stories! i can't believe how well you write! it's absolutely amazing. and, i've been dying to get another view from the hospital scene. usually, people like writing ooc's, au's, or something that's been written a million times, so thankyouthankyouthankyou! and once again, i adore your amazing writing! rlm
| Patrick-Henry chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Wow, I liked this a lot, it shows the kinder side of Jasper.
I really enjoy the way you tie all of your stories together...
This is my favorite sentence: "I felt Edward's determination like a sunrise behind me". It rocks!
Oh, by the way- in this amazing sentence,"Emmett's silent encouragement, Alice's hope, and Carlisle's ever-present compassion all swirled around me, strengthening me. And then I let Edward feel it, too. You can do this" you forgot the period after "this".
| JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
I absolutely loved this... Another unbelievable short...
| Dreams Shape the World chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Aww, so good! Jasper deserves to have his story said just as much as the other Cullens besides the story mentioned in Eclipse...
| mydirt09 chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Aw Japser...I am wondering why you named this the charge ?
| BloodsuckingLeech chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
I Love Jazz...your story here is very true to him and I want to thank you for telling his story. I wondered how he could go from being her savior in Twilight to her worst nightmare in New Moon. This is a good one I enjoy your sensitive writing style too...going back to read more of your stuff.