Reviews for Potter
Song of Grey Lemons chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
*sighs*. Sad, sad, sad... The last line is perfect. Good job. *sighs again*

Lemi
Treacherous Darkness chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
That last sentence... I've never read anything that takes Snape's animosity like that. Very original.
Ruusukainen chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Already been said, but I too love the last line. (:
Martha and Squirrel chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
I like this, it's like a thought that lives unspoken in the books (and the film).

I love how you can turn on a dime and go from light hearted to beautifully sad.
MrsRuebeusHagridDursley chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
I liked how this started out sort of humorous, but turned serious at the end. Good job!
firefly5151 chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Loved the last line.
sezao1 chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
oh...poor snape...

"He should have been his."

what a sad line...

well done

sarahxx
alan is stupid chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
-sigh- Very true.
hails chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Aw! SNAPE! dis is SO sweet! plz, plz carry on!
Mother of Tears chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Very, very good.
Jan-AQ chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Wow! I loved it! The last line was the best part.
Linwe Elendil chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
I liked this! Very well done.