Reviews for Pumpkins
greenteamoose chapter 2 . 11/25/2007
Marui is so hyper and spazzy! Complete randomness, but I was really amused XD.
Magical Girl Powpow chapter 2 . 10/11/2007
xD i love it xD

i so love it!
ren chapter 2 . 10/6/2007
this story seems like it'd work better as a hyoutei fic...dunno y
FrauleinRose chapter 2 . 10/6/2007
And so Marui became Niou's labrat ;D
Apple Snapple chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
PSH XDD pumpkins...

HALLOWEEN RULES!

Oh, but it'd be better if you double-spaced your dialouges.

Kirihara started asking random questions.

“What do pumpkins eat?”

“Where do pumpkins come from?”

“Are there crayons there from where they lived?”

“Do pumpkins have hair?”

“Why were they orange?”

“Do they sleep?”

“Do-”

Instead of:

Kirihara started asking random questions.

“What do pumpkins eat?”

“Where do pumpkins come from?”

“Are there crayons there from where they lived?”

“Do pumpkins have hair?”

“Why were they orange?”

“Do they sleep?”

“Do-”

It's harder to read. XD
FrauleinRose chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Heh. Thanks for the credit D I'll beta read the next one too.