|Reviews for Torn|
| 14tigeriris14 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
God that was heart wrenching... Deliciously written, fantastically composed, but incredibly sad. That being said, I loved every second of reading it. Cheers. :)
| RawNinja chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Wow. This story actually almost made me cry. It was that good.
| Yuri-hime chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Oooh, that ending was hard to read .
Knew it was coming, saw it coming, was hoping against hope that Ginny would stop Hermoine *just* before she drank the potion, but alas lol, she didn't p
All in all it was a *very* well-written fic. How have I not known that you have all these awesome stories written for me to read! XD
*now resolves to go through your fics and happily read*
Awesome job on this story, Ooki Great details, really spot-on convos, and sweet and tender emotions. I wish we could have gotten to see more of Hermoine and Fleur's past together, but the brief flashes were tender, and a pleasure to read
| MidnightPersona chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
I hate you so much right now.
Okay, not hate... but this... .
| endlessthirst chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Bloody brilliant piece of work here though i wished there was a happier ending. It could be more than just a one-shot since the premise is well-written. Love it, its one of the few one-shots that has ever made me emotional. Cheers
| sanevoodoo chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Not the ending I would have wanted, but I'm a sucker for happy endings! But it was a great story, really well written, one of the few fanfics that has ever really made me feel emotional.
| Icy-Windbreeze chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Wow, I kinda actually wished that it would have a happy ending but...I guess not. Still a great story though!
| Shiver Pixie chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I feel for Hermione and Fleur so much, it really saddened me to read how you finished it. But very well written. Sincerely.
| shetan83 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Argggh! Nooooo! Why?
| Bad one chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
This one-shot had a potencial to become a story like if earasing memories won't earase real love and stuff.
But I still like it the way it is too
| Roleplayer182 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
you should write a sequel where this leaves off and fleur tries to win her back, her memory returns somehow yadayadayada. voldemort dies!
| NegativeSpaces chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
How could you? Damn it. I come looking for a wonderfully written, amazing, uplifting Fleur/Hermione story. I find two out of three things.. wonderfully written and amazing. But Gods, the last few paragraphs were depressing, can't believe Hermione did that.
Write a sequel or something? PLEASE?
| mzjellybean.xx chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
That was an awesome story! A very sad ending though.
A sequel of this would be nice :)
| MemoryOfMusic chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
I really liked this, but it was so sad.
Made me a lil mad at ginny for not seeing what's best for hermione Q_Q
Oh and please write a sequel...that would be so great,
I mean she has forgotten about fleur, but that doesn't mean she can't fall for her again, does it?
| Toya chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
That's so great though the ending's so sad, but it's still good, anyway. The romantic relationship between Fleur and Hermione must not happen for any sakes. Fleur was her professor; moreover, she was with Ron. Sadly, Hermione was so in love with Fleur that she couldn't live with the sweet memories they had. As long as she wanted to be with Ron, she must do something. I like the ending, really.