|Reviews for Tears in Heaven|
| Dark Queen chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
*pissed off* It didnt show up Gr me no likey this...Anyway
Luv you darling
Luv your Dark Queen forever *bites*
| Abby chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Hey my lil Nixlet,
If you eva died i swear i would hate you for ever and ever and ever and ever *nods* i most definately would...
But you know i absoloutly adore this AND it made me cry, you kno about my obsession with coffins and such but i did not like thinking of you in a coffin dead, its ok if your awake and giggling away but if your dead then i dont like it one bit.
I love the emotions Tala displayed, am i mistaken but isnt that some of what i was telling you to write? Huh huh huh? so you did use it *feels proud*
I can so imagine you having a two year old daughter she would be so adorable and i would just squish the hell out of her and eat her with a spoon. *giggles*
Well im off to hide in my coffin as the sun is coming up
love you my darling dark princess
| Lamanth chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Hm...Wow...I don't really know what to say about that.
I'm shaking now ya know. I ahve to say you got me just right cus if you did die, I think I would say that I hated you. Hated you for leaving me. *sighs*
I'll be back. *wonders off*
Right I'm back and I've had a glass of milk, so yummy. I like the style of this very much, all the emotion is there without letting it take over. And I also think you got Tala down really well. But I'm still kinda freaked, in my head I can see you in that coffin and I don't like it one bit. Get out my bed already, lol. No, really though, I can see you lying there and you look so small and alone, I don't want to see you looking like that.
*hugs super tight* If you do die I'm going right over to the other side and dragging your ass back, unless I like over there in which case I'll just stay.
Love you so much
| Iluvbeyblade chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
AW! This was so sad! *sniffs*
Absolutely brilliant, Turkey! Tala's emotions were realistic, and all the flashbacks were perfect, and added little bits ... what's the word I want? Background? Yeah, that'll do. . So, you can write them! :P Just need to work at it!
The killing yourself part, odd, but there wouldn't have been a fic without it, would there? Lol! And good good, glad you have no plans for a real-life repeat! :P I'd miss you.
x Jellybean x